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8/25/20, 2:44 AM
This one is my favorite chapter so far and I finally gave a chapter in this series a "favorite". I really enjoyed the Joey flirting and sex scenes
8/25/20, 2:24 AM
@anon - Thank you sir! @Hypnoguy67 - Yeah. It just felt like the right way to end it, showing off how everybody gets to continue in their happy kinked up lives. I don’t plan to revisit the end, but when a story starts with a stranger coming to town, it felt like the right bookend. @anon2 - Thanks for powering through. At just north of 66k words, this is the longest thing I’ve ever written. @Tempest888 - Aw thanks bro, I’m blushing. Glad you enjoyed the plot buildup, the vignettes really helped break it into distinct acts for me, and I’m stoked it worked. And don’t worry — I’ve got pizza and weed, I’m takin’ the night off.
Aug 22, 2020
8/25/20, 12:12 AM
Cool story, brainiax! Very imaginative with lots of details to put you in the scene.
8/24/20, 11:33 PM
This whole series was amazing! I know you said you used the help of an AI story generator, but this blew my expectations out the window. It was a rollercoaster from start to finish. The main thing I loved about this whole series was that it wasn't just mindless sex like the majority of the stories on here. It had a steady plot and you kept building with every chapter. I hope to see you bring back Joey in the future, if possible. Honestly, I cannot wait for your next piece, just be sure to take a break cause i'm sure it wasn't easy coming up with all of this.
Anonymous
8/24/20, 11:28 PM
This story was the best seven hours of my life. It was the only seven hours of my life! Maximum Derek!!
8/24/20, 11:25 PM
I love how you concluded the story with more vignettes. The ending sets up the premise for another series that I hope you write sometime if you are so inspired. Incredible work!
8/24/20, 11:10 PM
Oh a cop scenario is definitely on my mind, I just haven't gotten around to write it yet! Remember Uncle Ray and his son Mike from the Superbowl chapters....? ;) Stay tuned!
Anonymous
8/24/20, 11:08 PM
wonderful
8/24/20, 9:39 PM
Love. This. Story. Please write more!
8/24/20, 9:07 PM
@MalSkin - Thanks man! I love it when I find out people are reading every day. Makes me feel like I've done my job right. There's one more chapter awaiting approval, just a little epilogue to put a bow on things and make a few of you scream at me. I wanted to portray the stranger as fundamentally a likable and good person. I think there's a lot more complexity than just 'good' and 'evil', no matter how we approach it. I strongly believe that everyone is the hero in their own story, and so from his perspective, this is a good story about making people happy and returning home. From another perspective, this would be a horror story, akin to invasion of the body snatchers.