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10/8/20, 5:41 AM
yeah i agree with tempest. would love to see him hypnotize coach. or even have coach find out about how he hypnotized his brothers and then have his brother hypnotize him and be a sex slave for coach as well
10/8/20, 5:14 AM
LOVE IT. Can't wait to read more of your work
10/8/20, 3:03 AM
Im sorry to hear about Dylan's parents' reaction to his relationship, but I have hope that his mom and siblings will come around. Honestly, with the multiple marriage proposals from all the Books, I kinda want to see a simultaneous wedding in the final book, where all these couples get married. Also, if any of the grooms don't have a parent to give them away at the wedding, I'm sure Daddy Jake would be delighted to step in for these boys. Honestly, I just really want to see a very big wedding after the big issue with the evil grey aliens has been solved.
10/8/20, 2:31 AM
I have been lurking on this site for over a year, enjoying all the hypnotic smut without ever making an account. This story, however, finally convinced me to take the 2 minutes to sign up just because I wanted to tell you how much I loved it! It hits so many fetish elements perfectly, and particularly scratches the identity-shift itch in me which is a very hard one to do well. The story has excellent pacing, is creative, and hypnotically assulting on the imagination. The feeling of being personally invaded by the tendrils of the mask is very real. I agree with Nutiper that this story belongs in the contest. In addition to his points, I'll also add that the rubber itself becomes the virus, taking over hosts and spreading through airborne transmission. This story belongs in the contest, and it also belongs in my personal favorites. 😉
Nutiper
10/8/20, 1:37 AM
Oh geez I *love* the voice of this piece, and those sly little humor moments. ("That was the first superspreader event" had me laughing aloud. If only real-life superspreader events were... that eventful........) Also I really liked that peek into sex dungeon culture, and I enjoyed the way the story combined an actual portrait of a realistic kink dungeon with the sci-fi nanites plot. (Of course, the moment the narrative said "...though they could also be fed an electrolyte and protein-filled gel medium..." I was like HMM, OH DEAR, HOW WILL THIS POSSIBLY GO WRONG.) Sexy nanite fetish clothing ravenous for bukkake — this was just such a fun story to read. Oh, wanted to add: not only does this story have a fantastic opening line, but it has an equally fantastic and gonzo closing line. Like, damn, who expected a sentient pandemic that, instead of wiping out the human race, goes "hmm actually let's get these humans some spaceships *so that we can infect aliens too*."
Lakritz24
10/8/20, 1:35 AM
Loving You Too. I love him.
Kovu
10/8/20, 1:11 AM
Hot hot hot!! please write more like this story!
10/8/20, 1:00 AM
> “What the actual fuck!” were the first words out of his mouth. > “You’re in a bit of a mood.” > “How could you do that to him?” > “You heard him,” Thomas said. “If I let him go, he’d have taken you and blown the whistle on this whole thing.” > “Then make him forget and leave. Why did you have to do all that other stuff?” > “It may seem cruel, mostly because it is, but my method only works by fully breaking down the participant. If I didn’t ingrain that conditioning as deeply as I did, it’d have worn off in a matter of hours and we’d be right back here.” > “So you had to rob him off all of his knowledge?” Ashton asked. This is without a doubt, one of my favorite written exchanges that I have ever read. The verbal exchanges between these two are so great that it makes me want to keep reading. I love the dumbing down of the professor; would love to see more of that, but would also love to see Ashton break free and get revenge on Thomas maybe dumbing him down? Keep up the good work!
10/8/20, 12:42 AM
Glad to see you're continuing this as well. Looking forward to reading more!
10/7/20, 10:49 PM
Seems like the majority is hoping for the sons to become sex slaves as well but I'm not a fan of that. Sure they should be taken down a peg and hypnotized into submission, but then they can be used to generate income by various means (mainly Prostitution) leaving more room for Dan to use his Pet Daddy. Maybe make it so that they think they are unworthy of the Alpha's attention and make them into hopeless/depressed whores who are just eager to be useful in anyway. They know Dan has chosen their father to be his bitch and they can do nothing but accept that they are only kept around to make money, but they accept this because they want to be useful.