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EntrancedGay92
12/12/20, 7:47 PM
I think your choice to start with Heather being brainwashed by the Doctor first instead of Will was a unique twist on the usual straight to gay plots. But, I also felt both her and Mary appear too much in the plot. I found myself skipping a lot of the story because, frankly, a woman being brainwashed is of no interest to me. I like the direction you are going with the conversion of Will, but it seemed to come abruptly. I imagine the Doctor as this cocky villain who would go out his way to explain to his male victims what he has up his sleeve. It is okay to pull the reader along for a bit; it adds tensions. But, I personally find writing hypnosis scenes to be a challenge; despite having gone under for the last seven years. I'm looking forward to seeing what is on the horizon.
12/12/20, 7:37 PM
Loved this story. Seriously pushes just about all of my buttons and as always, very well written.
Anonymous
12/12/20, 6:43 PM
I really like it. Please, continue with more sex submission.
12/12/20, 6:01 PM
Really well written!
12/12/20, 5:05 PM
Dude, I'm kinda of worried about you. Please give us a shout out so we know you didn't get Covid or something haha. Please come back soon, I'm so anxious for the next chapter!
Anonymous
12/12/20, 3:52 PM
this is really hot, i hope you continue it soon
Anonymous
12/12/20, 9:49 AM
getting better and better!!
12/12/20, 9:44 AM
Well, having a whole school as your boyfriends mean you will be covered in attention. Expecting cock fight for Piotre 's attention.
12/12/20, 7:57 AM
I'm glad to see this so well received. I waffled around with it for weeks before finally biting the bullet. > awe isn’t that~ wait where’s cynthia? Where indeed.
boi98229
12/12/20, 7:08 AM
Very hot! Thanks so much! i am looking forward to reading how Charlie can be completely convinced he is now one of Phillipe's boys.