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Jun 13, 2022
2/14/26, 8:26 PM
Awesome story. Controlled and seduced by smoking is a great fetish of mine
Feb 14, 2026
2/14/26, 6:10 PM
Hallo Dr. No! Der Text fesselt ab dem ersten Absatz und ich habe das erste Kapitel verschlungen. Man konnte beim Lesen gut nachvollziehen, wie es dem Erzähler geht. Ich freue mich schon auf die Fortsetzung(en). Gruß Vince. P,S.: Ich habe #german als Tag hinzugefügt, dann ist Deine Geschichte als solche auch gut zu finden.

2/14/26, 7:10 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) oh, vielen Dank. Den Tag hatte ich gar nicht auf dem Schirm. Das zweite Kapitel reift noch!
2/10/26, 2:43 PM
I'm not into football/soccer myself, but damn it's a hot story! Loved it!!

2/14/26, 7:00 PM
Thanks, @[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) ! What if I told you that I'm also not a big fan of football/soccer :rofl: I just ended up finding a lot of these players hot, and my horny mind did the rest I already submitted the next chapter for publishing, and it gets even kinkier
2/14/26, 6:58 PM
Wow! Who doesn't want a muscle jock as a bottom?
2/14/26, 5:54 PM
Nice, want to see how Peter an Miles fall for the villain
2/14/26, 5:18 PM
I hope that there is a follow up. I’d like to know how those “pesky police fellers” were handled.
Anonymous
12/3/16, 5:43 AM
I sound like a broken record but ---- It's called "Spelling and Grammar" check on MSWord. Write your story. Do some editing, and then go to "Review" and tap on the "Spelling and Grammar". It will help you with some of the basics. The readers don't expect Hemingway, but when don't you even spend the time to capitalize the 'i', it tells me that you don't give a shit --- so why should I invest my time in reading the story. As for the subsance, it was a good first effort. Try harder next time -- but keep writing. Be creative. You'll get the hand of it.

Anonymous
2/14/26, 4:11 PM
@Anonymous 🥳This is for Anonymous” who commented on Mr. FreaXed. In the last sentence of your comments, you misspelled “hang of it.” You spelled it as “hand”.
2/14/26, 2:32 PM
Spectacular work!
2/14/26, 12:26 PM
Eric gets well hung, love it. Brymor, great name, a real Orc name. What changes will Steve discover, after his first encounter?