Recent Comments

8/5/21, 1:02 AM
This is a wonderfully clever idea, a combination of regression, corporate espionage, and infantilism. I do however want to offer some mild critique on how it is presented. The lack of line spacing during the dialogue between the higher-up and the doctor made some parts of their conversation muddled, with it sometimes bleeding into one another while the mind digests the story. Beyond that, I genuinely commend this work!

8/6/21, 1:56 AM
@FatteningLionBoi thanks for the comments. i'm currently working on edits, including a new prequel. stay tuned.
Jan 16, 2013
8/6/21, 12:44 AM
true cure for straying
8/6/21, 12:19 AM
This is turning into a great story. Can't wait to see Dad and son go at it.
Aug 1, 2021
Jamiemboy
8/6/21, 12:08 AM
Loved it! I wanna be a cow like him 😈 especially the funnel! great add..
8/5/21, 11:58 PM
Intriguing premise. I have so many questions.
8/5/21, 11:47 PM
interesting twist for a stud
8/5/21, 10:41 PM
I enjoyed it, though didn't expect the darker turn. Would be cool to see more--if there's stuff about clothing like thongs--as part of the world building and how the relationship develops.
8/5/21, 10:01 PM
Oh, man. This story has been on my to-read list for a while, so imagine my surprise when I finally get to it and it's by the same guy who's doing *Magic Textbook*! I would have been excited to power through this series based on chapter 1 alone, but knowing you're the mastermind behind it kicks the anticipation up to 11. You're a really engaging author!

8/5/21, 10:37 PM
Thanks! This was my first story on GSS (actually, my first story anywhere, not counting some silly CYOC stuff). I'm still working on it, I just go side-tracked by other ideas! @Noam de Pluma
8/5/21, 10:01 PM
An improvement over the last date, for sure.
8/5/21, 9:52 PM
I dunno, this last date feels like it ruined Ken.