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12/7/25, 10:20 AM
I am loving this and holding my breath for the next instalment.

12/15/25, 7:25 PM
@[BeastOz](/user/show/918544) Well, don't pass out. Would hate to lose you! Next installment is proceeding apace, I can assure you. Always nice to see you in the comments! (I tried to reply to this earlier, but for some reason it logged me out and posted the comment anonymously! Strange.)
12/15/25, 7:59 AM
Haha it's a pretty unique idea! I enjoyed it! Hope to see more stuff 😉

12/15/25, 4:44 PM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) Glad you enjoyed it. Working on more chapters right now.
12/15/25, 2:34 PM
That hit really hard I feel so bad for Elijah I hope he gets a happy ending :(
Dec 15, 2025
12/15/25, 2:31 PM
interesting concept. i enjoyed the story so far love to see some brawny paladins fall and become corrupt with pleasure in the future.
Dec 15, 2025
Anonymous
12/15/25, 1:56 PM
Wildly hot story, great work! Can’t wait for the next chapter to see what happens when they go meet Vinnie.
Zander
12/14/25, 11:39 PM
The story is good , but in terms of plot, it's very illogical (I mean, the heavens wouldn't leave such a powerful demon alone and wouldn't let him grow stronger by enslaving people) and a bit stupid, unfortunately. But you conveyed the corruption quite well, even though everything happened very quickly, and if you close your eyes to the plot holes, everything is written quite decently for a single player. Для меня 6/10

12/15/25, 8:13 AM
@Zander It seems this may be the first fictional story you've ever read in your life! So let me explain - it's not real life! It is a fantasy and therefore it does not need to conform to reality. Haha in fact, if you want stories that conform to the real world then this site really isn't the place for you! Haha I don't think calling people's stories stupid is acceptable - but since your comment was even more stupid - we'll call it evens! Also - how do you know what the heavens would do!
12/15/25, 6:43 AM
@hypnoslut Thanks so much for a great story! Like the special boys in the story, i don't always know exactly what's happening. Somehow though that just feels like my brain fog that prevents some things from coming into focus. On a more technical note i suggest that you at the least run your text through a grammar and spelling check. Doing that will not unfortunately find many of the errors since real words are not used in the right places. For those you might need a real copy-editor (or perhaps at this point a really advanced AI?). An example i remember offhand is the confusion between "your" and "you're". Another is the words "an" and "and" a few times showing up where the other word should be. There are other places where a word necessary so the sentence would make sense was missing, or an extra word showed up. I am guessing that you love to bring your fantasies to life, but don't enjoy doing any serious review for copy-editing. If that's the case, i understand. Don't worry. The odd sentence had to be read a couple of times to make sense of it, but it was certainly not enough of an issue to stop me from pushing on to find out what happens next! Speaking of which, i am now off to get myself absorbed into the next chapter! [Using the word "absorbed" in that context is an unusual use of the word, but it does seem to fit the feeling I get from my deep enjoyment of the story. If it didn't seem to work for the rest of you in the same way, try reading the sentence again or check out the definition of "poetic license"! ;) i really gotta move on to the next chapter!]
12/15/25, 6:20 AM
Amazing story. Super hot! Came like Cedric reading it
12/15/25, 2:52 AM
This story is really hot. I love a superhero being hypnotized into a obedient slave. Can't wait for Superman to be fully hypnotized. I wonder who the first hero is? Hope we get a sexy flashback showing who and how.

12/15/25, 3:22 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) thanks so much. i'm raring to write more...
12/14/25, 11:41 PM
Great story so far, can't wait to read more.

12/15/25, 2:09 AM
Thanks! Stay tuned, next chapter will be posted early this week