Recent Comments

11/18/21, 6:16 PM
I hope to see another chapter! reminds me of things i would have wanted to wish to happen if i had a magical genie. All the fun safe, weird things I'd want to do. 100% appreciate this story, in that id be the same way... wanting to try out the limits off what his powers could do with my own fantasies. knowing that it's done in a way where I couldn't be hurt in the long run! Hope you write more on this!!

11/18/21, 8:17 PM
@Jojojojojojo Thank you! i feel very similarly and that's my inspiration for writing this couple, haha. I've been putting more of their backstories/shenanigans on gay cupid stories if you want to give them a look! [Here's my most recent](https://www.gaycupidstories.com/series/show/10001328).
Oct 30, 2021
Lohengrin
11/17/21, 8:22 AM
This piece stands on its own merits as a really well written short story quite beyond its gay interest. Very well developed characters and believable plot, even with the fantasy element--and that's hard to do. How come this is not for sale on Kindle? It would be quite competitive with the drivel they generally peddle there, and frankly, it's better than anything I've paid good money for. TTFN, LOHENGRIN

Anonymous
11/18/21, 7:51 PM
@Lohengrin Thanks so much, you're very kind. I hadn't really considered putting this on Amazon for sale, but that's an interesting idea. I generally make them available without charge but if people would be willing to buy them, I'm OK with that. If you're interested, more stories are available @ https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com Thank you again and I'm so very glad you liked the story
Oct 30, 2021
Papa Werebear
11/18/21, 7:51 PM
Thanks so much, you're very kind. I hadn't really considered putting this on Amazon for sale, but that's an interesting idea. I generally make them available without charge but if people would be willing to buy them, I'm OK with that. If you're interested, more stories are available @ https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com Thank you again and I'm so very glad you liked the story
11/18/21, 6:18 PM
Incredible story. My favorite story of the year has to be this plot line of chapter one. I can imagine Archie secretly grabbing the freshman's jockstrap and giving it a whiff reminding him painfully of the the kids conquest.... reaching down to tap his very own hole in sweet anticipation to get that smell back.
11/18/21, 4:12 PM
Really great expansion of the previous story. It also contrasts the last story nicely with how different the "clients" were and how they factored into the Transformation. Thanks for sharing more from this world with us.
Anonymous
11/18/21, 11:34 AM
Great start, can't wait for more!

11/18/21, 4:10 PM
Thanks! If you have anything you'd like to see let me
Beardfull1
11/18/21, 3:05 PM
Excellent story! Well written and extremely hot. I was missing this kind of stories lately, so thank you! Please keep writing .
11/18/21, 2:34 PM
Loved this story when I first read it and I love here now hahaha
8/26/21, 6:50 AM
Glad to see you're back!

11/18/21, 12:52 PM
@BPorter Thanks so much. I hope you know I follow hypnobitch religiously.
11/18/21, 12:15 PM
Wow! Will the next chapter be the conclusion? It feels like everything has come to a head.

11/18/21, 12:30 PM
@amul It should be! I'm still a bit on the fence about what path I should take.