Recent Comments

2/6/22, 5:20 PM
Holy hell. This is awesome. I love how this has gone so far. The setup is really cool, with cockmages in general and his magic allowing the narrator to know what’s going wrong. Everyone else being oblivious is great. And the magic still affecting the narrator is definitely leading to some hotness. I’m really liking the changes, and how they are building a mystery as to what type of person would make those changes. Can’t wait for more!
2/6/22, 8:17 AM
Great first story

2/6/22, 5:10 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
2/6/22, 12:55 PM
I really hope there is more.

2/6/22, 4:36 PM
@Cutlerfan Spell checking and proof reading the finale as we speak!
Some Guy
2/6/22, 3:56 PM
10/10. super hot. cant wait for the next part to see
2/6/22, 2:41 PM
so hot
2/5/22, 11:41 AM
another good story from one of the best authors here. wish you'll continue this so as your other series too!

2/5/22, 1:23 PM
@Erratic101 aw shucks that's such high praise! thanks for always supporting and commenting on my stories ☺️ a lot of these stories are just fleshed out fantasies so I'm glad they struck a chord with you. let me know if you have any ideas for Ali's new mindfucked manslave 😉

2/6/22, 2:20 PM
@GoodTime I can't stop reading this. I hope you will add the next installment soon! Hoping for Ali to become a more mind fucked slave and more disciplined muscular boy and still oblivious to him being slave. Findom would be an amazing add on to this on top of the humiliation!
2/6/22, 2:16 PM
really enjoyed that, hope he falls
2/6/22, 2:12 PM
Love it so much! Thank you for writing it so great
1/26/22, 5:08 PM
Very hot and so well written, Sir! You have a real talent for getting newbies hooked on grunge 😍

Rubber_Lover14
2/6/22, 12:06 AM
@Taylor ya know what, I've always loved this style of story but I've never known what genre it is. so thank you for saying this. now i know what to look for XD

2/6/22, 12:14 AM
@Rubber_Lover14 You're very welcome! I hope you find more hot ones like this story. I'd love to get a link if you find a particularly hot one 😘

2/6/22, 1:34 PM
@Taylor Why thank you, I'm glad you like it ^^
Rubber_Lover14
1/25/22, 9:20 PM
As i said when i commissioned this, 10/10. great writing, and the commissioner sure has taste 👀 anyways love the story, cant wait for the rest of the story

2/6/22, 1:26 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 Thank you kindly, yes if the story is any good it's only because the commissioner had such a good idea ^^