Recent Comments

JockMC
1/29/22, 1:54 AM
love this one!! Detailed description did make the story quite hot. A jockstrap that controlled the wearer's pennis would help introducing mind control/hypnosis elements to the storyline. For football gear fetish, this one reminds me of sensations when fully suited, from helmet, shoulder, girdle to compression shirt/pant, cleats and so on. Maybe helmet will alter the wearer's mind with subliminal messages, sexual pleasure and electromagnetic signals, with hormone and adrenaline boosted?

2/9/22, 3:04 AM
@JockMC Thanks for your comment and for liking this idea. I was trying to get the sensation of dressing as sensual; I'm glad to see you felt it and liked it. Your ideas are more suited (just happened to be the word I chose) for a sports story. I have an idea for a wrestling story where the headgear does play a role in the mind control. If you want to put all these idea into a story, it would have to be a high school or college setting. But again thanks for reading and liking this idea.
Martin
2/8/22, 9:53 PM
I'm a late reader of this chapter... but I have to chime in to add my praises. This chapter is a lot of exposition, but man how much fantasy and creativity is there inside of you. I wonder where you get this from. What it must be looking like inside of your head. Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the final chapter!

2/9/22, 1:13 AM
@Martin Thank you Cap'n, and I appreciate you reading this even though it's not your normal material.
Martin
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
Such a bitter-sweet story. Forbidden love indeed, and it always invokes anger that people had (and still have) to suffer this. Thank you for this great experience. 5/5 for writing and romance.

2/9/22, 1:05 AM
Thanks, @Martin! I appreciate the feedback :)
2/9/22, 12:16 AM
Im loving this spin on the Pollination series. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Sparks
2/8/22, 11:30 PM
woah this was amazing! Love seeing this fantastic story develop!
Apr 19, 2010
2/8/22, 11:11 PM
the mom getting killed was kinda out of nowhere and weird but the rest of it was super hot lol
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
been waiting for this! was worth the wait! can't wait for the next part
Anonymous
2/8/22, 9:10 PM
Wow, that did not take long at all. Poor dumb Dallas has no idea what is happening.
2/8/22, 8:02 PM
A very hot story. I could almost smell the big man's musk as I read it.
2/8/22, 7:28 PM
Very nice.