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2/26/22, 6:43 PM
Great story!

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thank ye' @Cutlerfan!
2/26/22, 5:36 PM
Very fun story. It reminds me of a cross between Baralai and Ethan White's pink fairy, though of course it still reads like a Derek Williams story, complete with "happy ending." As you mentioned above, i like that you took the classic "roommate turns gay" story and give it an imaginative twist. Makes it feel more unique. For what it's worth i think "heterosexual life partner" has its own TV Tropes page, which is where i know it from.

2/26/22, 7:40 PM
Thanks @BlindSeer0, I'm a fan of both those authors. I was just looking at Baralai's author page yesterday, wishing for a new story. I've blown so many loads to the Himringyo series.
2/26/22, 1:37 PM
Loved this, totally bonkers. I really enjoy how you try and stretch yourself with your stories and ideas Derek. Brilliant.

2/26/22, 4:41 PM
Thanks @Tattcub! I have a lot of fun playing. Honestly, the writing would get boring if I didn’t.
2/25/22, 9:35 PM
Great story as always. One minor thing: It feels weird for a straight guy to use the phrase "my heterosexual life partner" about his roommate. it took me out of the story for a moment - which was a shame. I am sure you could have described their sexualities without using such an artificial and technical phrase.

2/25/22, 10:48 PM
Thanks @Lytcom. The phrase is a reference to a Kevin Smith movie and suggests some of the narrator's characterization.

2/26/22, 3:35 PM
Given I’ve seen those movies and remembered the quote, it worked perfectly to paint a picture of the character for me. @Derek Williams

2/26/22, 4:34 PM
Thanks @MonsterMash62! That’s always the tricky part about pop culture references. On one hand, I love that the shorthand works for some folks. On the other hand it pulled Lytcom out for a moment - that’s a tricky balance.
2/26/22, 3:41 PM
very hot love to see how this goes
rwriter51
2/26/22, 7:53 AM
So glad to see this story again. I read it maybe two years ago or so on Nifty, and loved then. I'm looking forward to more updates to our favorite jock pussy.

SC Walker
2/26/22, 3:26 PM
@rwriter51 This is actually a reboot/remake of my old story! I added a lot more and made the characters more complex.
2/26/22, 1:45 PM
That was fuckin HOT, wish it was at least semi real, but then I'd probably wast away and die though 😒
2/26/22, 6:09 AM
Great as

2/26/22, 6:09 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk Great as always! * No matter how many times I tried to edit it in, it won't work

2/26/22, 7:41 AM
Thank ye’ @GiveInToTheMusk!
2/26/22, 5:01 AM
The ball pit was so clever! I always appreciate when authors try a totally unique "game" like that. Great work.

2/26/22, 7:41 AM
Hah, thanks @Jockboy Joe! I was trying to figure out what kind of things he’d run into and the ball pit is my favourite.
Evan
2/26/22, 7:30 AM
This has some great build up, uncertainty in for the main character in what is going on, and slow discovery of the changes he's experienced and their curse as well as how to enjoy them. Looking forward to seeing the continuation. Also send like Sammy had desires he's been trying to keep hidden from his best friend.