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Jack
3/31/22, 5:35 AM
GAH! I didn't expect this at all! I jumped on the site just to see if there was anything new to spark my interest and there's CHAPTER 2 OF ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES OF ALL TIME?!? And it's so fucking good! There's plot, character development, tendrils of a dozen different elements to explore, and just superior writing. I know there wasn't a whole lot of sex stuff in this chapter, but it was clearly such a great addition to the story itself. I can't wait to see how you explore this, and how things develop between Finn, Rada, and Jack. I know I've always wanted Finn and Jack to end up together, but Rada deserves to be happy, as well! It's hard to tell for certain, but life in his dimension doesn't seem all that fun to me. Regardless, the paths you've laid out in this chapter are enticing, and I can't wait for more. Thank you for taking the time to write more of this story, Author. This has really been such a treat!

3/31/22, 6:14 AM
@Jack You were so strongly on Team Finn I was worried that you would not like this chapter since it's Rada focused
3/30/22, 5:35 PM
Great writing. Love the way you have avoided many of the tropes of so many Djin stories. Love the subtle almost subversive relationship dynamics. Overall, this is terrific.

3/31/22, 6:13 AM
@Speedychopslover Thank you. Avoiding the typical genie tropes was actually the driving force of why I started writing this.
3/30/22, 12:26 PM
LOVED the Genie explanation! magic as equals technology is such a fun premise and it's so engagingly depicted for us here. Jack is so cute and sweet i REALLY want him to use at least ONE MORE WISH, and REALLY DO NOT WANT him to use any other wishes. Rada is an amazing Genie, the most uniquely done I've seen. Bravo! a superb installment and continuation to a superb story.

3/31/22, 6:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth so what do you want him to do with his second wish?
Anonymous
3/28/22, 1:03 AM
This story is awesome! Will there ever be a chapter three, or is this the end? I'd love to know what happens to Todd next.

3/28/22, 6:14 AM
So glad you like it! There's a little hanging bit where Mark starts putting together his next prank, which I cut out of this posting since it was not complete (which I think upset people, since it seems like the story just sorta trails off). I've never quite been drawn back to keep working on it, but who knows, maybe one day...

Anonymous
3/31/22, 12:50 AM
Got it. I've loved everything about this story so far, and Mark and Todd are two of the best characters I've ever read about in a hypnosis story. I'm really hoping you'll be inspired to finish the third chapter someday! 🙂

3/31/22, 5:40 AM
Thanks for the kind words! It's definitely encouraging!
3/31/22, 5:00 AM
LOVE this story - really hoping that you'll come back with Chapter 3 and more - great writing - hoping the size difference and masculine changes grow further and further - Awesome job!!
3/30/22, 2:34 PM
Finally read this—it’s so hot! I love how Finn dominates Jack, and the genie wish is so clever; the world is compelling and immersive. I feel like I’m in it. Your writing is always so fun.

3/31/22, 4:35 AM
@Soren Fitz Oh thank you! I think fun is a good way to describe this one!
Mar 29, 2022
Mitch_CoRob
3/31/22, 3:32 AM
So hot. Thank you for sharing! Loved this story and I hope you continue to write.
littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 2:41 PM
Like any good fiction, this story is based on reality. When he was dating me, my husband trained me in the exquisite joy of cumming when being fucked or by using dildos. Dildos come in so many sizes, shapes, and textures that each gives a very different experience. Now that we are married, he never allows me to stroke myself, but to cum for him only when he is fucking me or I am using one of my silicone lovers. He has been reading this and has now ordered me my first set of thongs. He is very excited for them to arrive. Thanks for a great story!

3/29/22, 4:14 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com that's awesome that my story has inspired you in real life. Hopefully by the time the final chapter is released you can wear your thong and ride a dildo while you read!

littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/29/22, 7:18 PM
@GoonNoob Yes, he has decided to try thongs. I have not seen what he ordered, but he said it was time I look pretty as well as slutty for him. I expect he will want me to perform for him both in a thong and with a dildo or two, but I don't know.

3/29/22, 7:48 PM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com I'm sure you'll look slutty for him, with a dildo in your hole and a sucking on a second dildo.

littledickslave@yahoo.com
3/31/22, 2:42 AM
@GoonNoob I'll do my very best so my husband gets hard and cums watching me.
Ember
3/14/22, 5:23 AM
Am I right in thinking this was inspired by this comic? https://e621.net/posts/1598855

Just Some Dude
3/31/22, 2:13 AM
I thought the exact same thing lmaoo @Ember
Anonymous
3/31/22, 2:12 AM
I wonder what would happen if he hired another professional hypnotist to try and counter Jamie's control over him? 🤔