Recent Comments

4/22/22, 7:00 AM
A yes, conflicting feelings indeed. I thought for sure Corey would end up with Hank, that the protectiveness was going to evolve into domination. Honestly the fact he was blind wasn't a negative for me, there was actually equality in that, if you would corrupt a sighted gym goer, you would corrupt a blind one too. It's just poor Hank! I thought he would start developing his own musk. There is enough story thread left for a sequel for sure. Although I want every story to keep going :sweat_smile:
4/22/22, 6:59 AM
Oh my gosh, this was such a pretty story, and pretty hot, too—this is really high quality content that I’m surprised you didn’t crosspost to Cupid! I’m glad I read this. Well done.
4/22/22, 6:08 AM
This story is so enjoyable and unique, I loved it!
4/22/22, 5:49 AM
Do you think you will ever add more to this hot hot tale? 😃😛😛😛
Satyr Hedonist
4/22/22, 4:59 AM
Io, Pan!
Anonymous
4/22/22, 3:10 AM
Loving this series!! Hot!!
nycboot
4/21/22, 10:49 PM
@Spiral Desires - in a sense, the denouement of the story is not the thing. It's the seduction that makes the story hot. For me, I love when the victims realize they're being taken in and struggle to avoid it. You can't go through these sections quickly. If I can offer a kind suggestion, it's not just that Chris looks into Kaa's eyes...it's that he recognizes what he's done and has to battle with himself to resist while his inner strength not only succumbs but he feels Kaa's internal presence becoming part of him. That battle should last a good number of paragraphs. :) Whatever you do, I'm sure it'll make us hot! Good luck!
Anonymous
4/21/22, 10:33 PM
very hot would love to see more from this amazing gym
4/21/22, 10:22 PM
Taking advantage of a blind guy definitely made me wince for a sec, but my GOSH this was hot, and it ended really cute. 🥰
Anonymous
4/21/22, 9:39 PM
I wish they'd been a bit more forthcoming with their plans earlier in the interactions. If they communicate more from now on I will enjoy the story more.