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5/22/22, 7:48 PM
That was a hot chapter. I almost thought Stu was going to get carried away and transfer super powers into David and make him a super villain. The person you love the most changed to satisfy your sexual desires could destroy civilization and corrupt you in the end.

5/22/22, 8:48 PM
See, that's a deliciously tempting idea @TexMuscle, but not where I'm heading in this story. Although I think you might like what's coming up.
5/22/22, 4:50 PM
Great chapter! Glad we got some background on what made our super boy. Hope he and David are able to work through all the stress and difficulty. I think we need more detail on Patrick soon as right now he feels too much like an insufferable political consultant packaging up Stu for money (which I get is a goal so he can make a living) And after rescuing that insufferable woman maybe he needs a costume change that screams I'm gay you twat ;) Can't wait for the next part

5/22/22, 8:47 PM
Well @Stormbound, perhaps that's because Patrick is insufferable and I'm afraid he, much like a lot of the world, doesn't know how to handle having the world's only superhero as a client. In a world of image and brand consultants, he's really only interested in making Neutron a brand and keeping it profitable. Hoping for a happy ending for Stuart and David? Well; I won't spoil anything for you here in the comments!
5/22/22, 8:40 PM
Another great chapter! Loved the introduction of Ben and hope this is not the last of him. Hope to see what happens next soon.
5/22/22, 8:36 PM
Loving this story!
Arlo
5/22/22, 8:08 PM
I really teared up in the end, it was so beautiful
Evan
5/21/22, 1:27 PM
Catching up on this series and absolutely loving it. What an awesome chapter and quite a nice reveal. Poor Sam. I hope he can be happy.

5/22/22, 8:02 PM
@Evan Thank you Evan for the very kind words. Chapter 3 will be coming soon and we'll get to see where the next step in Sam's journey leads.
5/22/22, 8:01 PM
An absolutely wonderful ending and most of all, a well deserved ending for Xander who never thought he would ever get the happy ending. It's been a wonderful journey and Janus and Xander have been a treat to get to know as they got to know each other and fell in love. Thank you for a really wonderful story, Twan.
5/22/22, 7:50 PM
Hope there was a part 2 of this.
5/22/22, 7:45 PM
That was amazing. The world needs more asian dom stories like this
5/21/22, 11:56 PM
I hope part 2 comes soon

5/22/22, 7:04 PM
@darkblade2814 I'm still planning on writing the sequel (and I have a draft), but there are a lot of other stories on my plate at the moment, so I don't really have an estimate when it's coming out.

5/22/22, 7:07 PM
@bluesuedewho I see, good luck on all your stories