Recent Comments

8/27/25, 9:31 AM
This chapter is the golden standard of erotic writing!!! Such a great chapter!
8/27/25, 8:25 AM
I really love this story so far! You've created some great characters and a really fun problem to overcome.
8/27/25, 8:10 AM
Nice ending. Definitely worth the wait.
8/27/25, 8:14 AM
I would love this to actually happen ♥
Bottom Jock
8/27/25, 12:24 AM
Malcom was an interesting addition. I was feeling the dynamic that had been established with Ryan being the team's bitch. Couldn't Malcom have been any character from the team? Also, I'm still holding out hope for some descriptions of Ryan's big ass and how it has grown to accommodate his new position on the team. Still a hot story tho.

8/27/25, 7:56 AM
@Bottom Jock the only character Malcolm could have been on the team is Coach, but future chapters will establish why it was Malcolm.
Anonymous
8/26/25, 11:10 PM
i would habe loved for him te be made the teams bitchboy. Malcom as a new charakter feels too hasty written and diesnt really fit for me

8/27/25, 7:55 AM
@Anonymous Malcolm will make more sense with the next chapter (just don't expect that soon).
8/27/25, 6:53 AM
Hot chapter, came 3 times on my first read, keep them coming 🔥
Ben
8/27/25, 5:29 AM
Wow this was hot!!! 🥵🔥
8/27/25, 4:12 AM
Your stories are the hottest. I'm always left wishing for more chapters.
8/27/25, 4:01 AM
Holy cow wow! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and loved Dak in (and out of) those white briefs. The way he is completely oblivious to his predicament and surroundings as he shamelessly satisfies his own urges and the urges of others is masterful. I can't wait to see what befalls Dak next.