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7/3/22, 11:30 PM
Ass upgrade, though one that is a special ability that sorta counters what Rusty is doing. Maybe an passive which turns (temporarily) submissiveness into dominance, though mainly focused on dominating the one fucking. Or one that is a 'temptation' and would make Dusty interested in defying Rusty since he'd be under control of Carter's ass? I don't want Rusty to win(like others), and Carter getting an ability which makes the weakness Rusty gave him a strength against him would be nice.
Jul 3, 2022
7/3/22, 6:32 PM
One of the hottest stories I've read on here in quite a while. I love the use of gooner slang in the story, and unlike Heru Kane, I loved the twist at the end.

7/3/22, 11:06 PM
@Hypnothrill thank you for the high praise! I'm very versed in gooner slang lol and I've learned my lesson with other stories that the people want to see the antagonists get their cumupence sooner rather than later
Jul 3, 2022
Kip
7/3/22, 5:10 PM
Oh my GOD that was hot. Great idea, everything was as close to perfect as it could get. Well done!

7/3/22, 11:04 PM
@Kip thank you :) I certainly enjoyed writing this one and getting into character ;)
Jul 3, 2022
Anonymous
7/3/22, 4:57 PM
What does enm mean

7/3/22, 11:03 PM
it was a wrong tag.
7/3/22, 10:45 PM
Hot hot hot, I loved it! ^_^ thos scratches all the right spots for me :D
Apr 18, 2019
7/3/22, 10:45 PM
Insanely hot !
7/3/22, 10:20 PM
I recommend the custom spelling, but since Carter is becoming the dumb jock slave, he should let his master make the decision for him. This reinforces the dom/sub status and still provides creativity on what could happen. And since Carter is completely getting it from the rear, may I suggest chasity be introduced? Perhaps some more kink wear like a leather jockstrap or some latex?
7/3/22, 10:16 PM
Hot! I love the denial and control of stories like this when muscled guys get owned. Please keep going!
7/3/22, 10:02 PM
Terrific story! Really enjoyed it.