This was a hot series to follow. I'd love to learn more about how things go once he "graduates" from the supplements, but I think the ending works well. Nothing overstayed its welcome.

I've meant to post this for a while so here we go. I can't help but shake the feeling that this chapter and somewhat in the previous feels 'forced'. As if the chapters just don't sit right. Everything up to now has been polished smooth with a clear rhythm and progression that flowed. Not only were their some punctuation/grammatical errors that the editor should have corrected in this chapter. But what's happening to Jamie doesn't, and by extension this whole ordeal he is currently in, doesn't flow with the rest of the story. Above all, where and how is Jamie able to resist so hard? Why is he suddenly, now in this moment choosing to unleash his bottled anger? Jamie submitted to his Master. Fully. He symbiont is fully integrated with him. Therefore, Myriad should already have full awareness of Jamie's state of mind and physical condition. And can therefore correct at anytime. Which was proven when he went inside and took note of the mental dam in Jamie's psyche. Jamie shouldn't be able or have reason to be such a hard-ass to Dusk. Yet here he is fighting back tooth and nail over a collar? This doesn't add up. Granted, Jamie has been aware of the complicity and duality that Myriad operates under. He knows the corruption of the Association. He has several legitimate reasons to be angry and frustrated about not having control over his fate. And all this has been hinted at and brought up through the series. But the timing and execution of this here is suspect. Its too sudden and too unexplained. Regardless, I am still loving this series. I am eager for more. And maybe more context will be provided in the next chapter. This has been such an amazing read throughout. With that said, I might have called it. That this story would either progress in one of two directions. That either Jamie fully integrates with the network under Myriad and goes after the heroes. Or he gets caught and sent to the Tomb. So unless that white at the end here was Jamie's attack, it seems a prison break is coming.

If he gets restored he might enjoy being cake again one day.

What I fantastic second chapter, I already loved the first one. Is a third chapter in the works? I thought the ending was extremely teasing xD

I like it, but it feels like a big change from chapter 1, like it should have been another story? The first chapter was pretty much just hypnosis and now it's gone with what seem to be magical transformations? I just feel like these are good chapters but of two different stories now. I'm a bit sad if the commission led to that.

You can't just lie that they are best friends and worse that they love each other, not when they both conspire against each other, takes me out of the scene if I am laughing at them. Sex scenes themself were good, though a little repetitive.

Spermed my spermies from my goonerdong.

Is it bad that this series makes me really really badly want to edge myself and then go to the Mormon church near me and say I'm curious about converting?

A very cute read! I’m curious to see how things will develop with the couple and their interspecies relationship!

The transformations are soooo hot! I hope there'd be an "Another Eve of Becoming" story too just like Curse of Entity! ❤️