Recent Comments

12/17/22, 9:15 PM
What an incredible chapter! I absolutely loved the intro with Gerald: the level of detail about Noah's conflicts, the debate about hypnosis and consent, and the very real fears that people have regarding their deepest sexual fantasies are perfectly represented. The "goodbye" dinner, too, was tearjerking. It's also a fascinating mix of sexy, hilarious, and terrifying to see the person Danny becomes (the removal of the name in Noah's thoughts is a great touch): he's a sort of caricature of the "young, dumb, and full of cum," someone so cliche and stereotypical that it borders on parody. Yet we know that there's a REAL person in there, so seeing the death of Danny and the transformation into this...THING is brilliant. My own vote is to consult with Gerald, if only because he clearly understands what's going on and can provide insight (I genuinely suspected that Gerald might be some kind of villain who had secretly hypnotized Noah, but he seems to be on the up-and-up--but perhaps another twist is coming). The other options run the risk of people abusing the former Danny or the situation. And what a fascinating study of consent: can this new person do that? Can he be said to be able to consent when his inhibitions have been hypnotically removed? Thank you for creating a space to raise those questions. And finally, a name choice. Name, name...let's see. Former-Danny is operating on pure carnal desire. The sex drive alone moves him. In the days of the ancient Greeks, it was the Dionysian rites that represented this kind of pure, unmitigated sex. Dionysus was also known as Bacchus and Eleutherios (I looked them up on Wikipedia!). So I vote for Luther! :D

Martin
12/18/22, 5:16 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) What a fantastic comment, thank you so much that you spent to much thought on this. That you liked the goodbye scene is particularly good to hear. It's probably a bit kitschy, but I dig things like that, and it's fun writing about it. It's probably exactly how I would feel if I were in that situation. I didn't want to repeat the same "mindless sex toy" routine, which is why I chose a different angle this time. It also gives me a bit more potential for creating drama and just more endless sex scenes (which I love nevertheless). Thank you for your suggestions. The story needs some kind of villain, I guess, let's see what I come up with :) And Luther is ... really a brawny name, especially for a boy like this. Maybe that's why it's just the right one. Let's see if there'll be any other good ideas.
12/18/22, 4:53 PM
This set up is so hot. Cannot wait for the rest
12/18/22, 12:31 AM
Your descriptions are so sensual and the world of Consummation is so delightful and has so much going on it. I love seeing all this from Talley's perspective. He's been one of my favourite characters in this universe ever since Top Maker!

12/18/22, 3:52 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I always like to talk about how Talley just popped into my life one day while writing chapter 4 and made me fall in love with him. He just adds so much adolescent joy to everything. I hope to keep all the perspectives fresh and fun, too! Looking forward to sharing more of Talley’s personality in the next chapter, and more of the wonder of Consummation.
12/18/22, 3:47 PM
As good as the last chapter this one was even better,which shows what a gift you have. Thanks for sharing it!
12/18/22, 3:05 PM
Jack, sorry to hear you had Covid but glad you are recovered. I just at loved this chapter. I was fantastic. Thank you for making my day. These stories make me want to give you some joy in return which is why I send those emails.
12/18/22, 2:55 PM
FUN! So fun!
chen
12/18/22, 2:29 PM
Very deep story
12/18/22, 1:58 PM
i just love this playful story. I am so happy they have the ability to taste as ghosts. the salty sweet cream from the men... so hot.
Anon
12/18/22, 1:42 PM
Consult Gerald
12/18/22, 11:24 AM
This is a very well-written story, and I love where it’s going. I anticipate the next chapter with great eagerness. Write away, old chap!