Recent Comments

2/21/26, 11:26 PM
thank you so much for writing this, I just read chapters 1 - 6 all in one go and am loving your ideas so much! After years of reading porn stories, it's rare to come across something so fresh and original. Also, the mental play and what you're doing to Sam and Joe's bodies is just delicious. Never doubt yourself, and indeed do keep going with whatever feels right (even if it's not what you planned in a brainstorm) x my artist website is justjake.co.uk if you want to have a look / get in touch. I would happily draw some of these scenes
2/21/26, 11:04 PM
To quote Dell: "Impressive!" And the story unfolded naturally without violating the laws of physics or nature. You've got style.
2/21/26, 10:24 PM
After reading your first and second stories I am disappointed that you don't seem interested in adding to what you started when they are so good.
Anonymous
2/21/26, 10:22 PM
Great chapter cant wait for more 👍
2/21/26, 10:20 PM
Good beginning. Got us hooked. Now we're disappointed that we haven't seen more in 3 months time. Please don't tease and then don't follow through!
Feb 21, 2026
2/21/26, 9:00 PM
Very hot story!
Aug 23, 2025
brad
2/21/26, 8:06 PM
I LOVED this story! It combines a lot of my favorite themes. Please keep writing stories about dominant Chinese men. The world needs more of them.

2/21/26, 8:40 PM
@brad Thanks. I believe there were a couple of other stories that, I put here, that fit that criteria.
2/21/26, 7:23 PM
Ok, you are moving all the right elements together in the right way. You're writing style and point of view is unique. You're not just following just the standard formulae.

Ink & Steel Bear
2/21/26, 8:35 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Maybe I should subtitle it “A Romance Novel for Kinky Fuckers.” ;)
2/21/26, 7:38 PM
I was never much of a fan for those "magical, mystical . . . I don't know how this is happening plots," but I like how this is cumming together. You're got great powers of description.

Ink & Steel Bear
2/21/26, 8:31 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) I am trying not to lean into the fantastical aspects of it, but “and then, after years of plastic & experimental surgeries, hormone treatments, and going to the gym daily…” makes for dry reading. ;)

Ink & Steel Bear
2/21/26, 8:34 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) And thank you, for your suggestion and encouragement. Good to get feedback, to know what works and what doesn’t.
2/21/26, 7:07 PM
Got all the right elements. Lets see how you put them together.