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Feb 21, 2026
2/21/26, 9:00 PM
Very hot story!
Aug 23, 2025
brad
2/21/26, 8:06 PM
I LOVED this story! It combines a lot of my favorite themes. Please keep writing stories about dominant Chinese men. The world needs more of them.

2/21/26, 8:40 PM
@brad Thanks. I believe there were a couple of other stories that, I put here, that fit that criteria.
2/21/26, 7:23 PM
Ok, you are moving all the right elements together in the right way. You're writing style and point of view is unique. You're not just following just the standard formulae.

Ink & Steel Bear
2/21/26, 8:35 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Maybe I should subtitle it “A Romance Novel for Kinky Fuckers.” ;)
2/21/26, 7:38 PM
I was never much of a fan for those "magical, mystical . . . I don't know how this is happening plots," but I like how this is cumming together. You're got great powers of description.

Ink & Steel Bear
2/21/26, 8:31 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) I am trying not to lean into the fantastical aspects of it, but “and then, after years of plastic & experimental surgeries, hormone treatments, and going to the gym daily…” makes for dry reading. ;)

Ink & Steel Bear
2/21/26, 8:34 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) And thank you, for your suggestion and encouragement. Good to get feedback, to know what works and what doesn’t.
2/21/26, 7:07 PM
Got all the right elements. Lets see how you put them together.
2/21/26, 4:12 PM
I can't wait for this series to start back up again!
2/21/26, 3:50 PM
Was here for Aladdin and wasn't disappointed :p
2/21/26, 3:48 PM
Please Sir, May we have some more … ?
2/21/26, 3:28 PM
I love this story! And this chapter in particular, because it combines two of my favorite plot devices: a cuckolded woman and quick, oblivious corruption of side characters. I also love the short vignettes within these chapters, as I can feel the extent of Adrian's power more. Though, I wonder what happened to the twins after Adrian left the elevator? lol I also like to think that as Adrian walks through the streets distressed over his whole Colin situation, he just carelessly throws commands to random men he passes by just to shake off his pissed off energy (gets more unhinged the more he gets pissed)! Can't wait for part 3!
2/21/26, 4:28 AM
Always love seeing stories from Mafisto! I prefer the stories with a little more focus on smaller groups of guys getting gradually controlled than the masses being completely zonked, but this was still super hot regardless. You never disappoint!

2/21/26, 1:44 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) I tried to keep a balance so the masses enslaved are more a backdrop to the main story, with people like Blake, Jules and Colin at the forefront. And in lieu of the gradually controlled, I have the obstacle of Colin not being physically there yet. Also the waxing and waning of the powers in sync with the eclipse.