Recent Comments

10/26/25, 2:57 PM
way darker than I expected, but good and imaginative story. Well written too.
Anonymous
10/26/25, 2:45 PM
Oh, Elder, please do bless us with the third chapter! We beg you!
10/26/25, 2:42 PM
Every bit as hot as the previous chapters. Looking forward for more!
Oct 16, 2025
10/26/25, 5:35 AM
Great story. I hope there will be more to cum

10/26/25, 2:26 PM
@[Whitegloves](/user/show/1636969) Thanks. I have no plans to continue this one but might do something similar though not consensual. It could involve hypnosis, or another means of mind manipulation.
10/26/25, 2:08 PM
😈😈😈
10/26/25, 1:32 PM
Loved this story!
10/26/25, 1:26 PM
I enjoy how Ivan is accepting this more and more. And now reading that Jake is caged just adds to that. Though i wonder if the coaches will get too greedy and this all falls apart? Also, since this story is closely mirrored to Brody's Fall, I wonder if rubber will be introduced? Maybe not a full suit like that story, but maybe as underwear and swimwear, or even a singlet?
Anonymous
10/26/25, 12:37 PM
Yeah this is being WAY too morbid for me. I used to get off on reading the first few chapters and even put it in my favorite list but Ivan's humiliation is DRAGGING on and on. And I guess he's just a dumb jock because he really can NOT find a way to get out -- which to me is unbelievable. I'm out.
10/26/25, 12:15 PM
omg i love that. pls the new chapter 🔥
10/26/25, 12:07 PM
Wow, i love love this chapter. So hot. A top and verse transformation. And where can i find an Alpha Andy?