Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/16/25, 7:05 PM
What I fantastic second chapter, I already loved the first one. Is a third chapter in the works? I thought the ending was extremely teasing xD

12/17/25, 1:17 AM
@Anonymous I like a good cliffhanger 😉
12/16/25, 11:58 PM
I like it, but it feels like a big change from chapter 1, like it should have been another story? The first chapter was pretty much just hypnosis and now it's gone with what seem to be magical transformations? I just feel like these are good chapters but of two different stories now. I'm a bit sad if the commission led to that.

12/17/25, 1:15 AM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Hey! Thanks so much for reading. I apologize if it's a bit jarring, I tried to leave a couple of breadcrumbs at the end of the first chapter to indicate that something more might be going on as opposed to regular hypnosis. But I understand full transformation is a huge departure. It is at the request of the commissioner. It was always the going to be the direction of the story.
Anonymous
12/16/25, 10:15 PM
You can't just lie that they are best friends and worse that they love each other, not when they both conspire against each other, takes me out of the scene if I am laughing at them. Sex scenes themself were good, though a little repetitive.
12/16/25, 9:25 PM
Spermed my spermies from my goonerdong.
9/25/24, 2:52 PM
Is it bad that this series makes me really really badly want to edge myself and then go to the Mormon church near me and say I'm curious about converting?

9/28/24, 2:08 PM
@GoodBoy Do it

9/28/24, 7:54 PM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) I'm booked in tomorrow. They even have a thing where you can ask two missionaries come to meet you to take you there and walk you through the ceremonies. If I end up converted I'm blaming you lmao

2/11/25, 9:02 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) So what came of that?

12/16/25, 8:57 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) You haven't been seen in several months. Did you actually convert?
12/16/25, 7:30 PM
A very cute read! I’m curious to see how things will develop with the couple and their interspecies relationship!
12/16/25, 4:30 PM
I hope those four cocks are not locked away forever. It would be a shame to deny the world of their cum.
12/16/25, 3:57 PM
So hot. But I do object characterizing Tim as "the weakest". that might be true physically, but I do think he has enough mental fortitude to resist Bane here long enough to challenge him.
Anonymous
12/14/25, 7:56 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter/bulge

DrA
12/16/25, 3:16 PM
@Anonymous I hope uou will enjoy the series!
12/16/25, 2:14 AM
Soren, this story is starting to get really good! Super fun, sexy, and loaded with characterization and story. And usually, I get kind of lost in action/fight scenes, but I was able to follow this one easily, which made it really enjoyable. That scene with Chase lifting off River's cock was like a bomb scene or something, haha, really campy but fun! Great work!

12/16/25, 2:08 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) @[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, Time hammered it into me that fights needed to be clear, concise, not overly detailed or complicated, and focused on the feelings of the characters, and I think my fights in this story are much improved for it. Heh, and, yeah, I heavily indulged in that ‘pulling off his cock’ scene—I thought it was hot when writing it, and I think it gives some fun suspense! Glad you’re enjoying the characters still; they’ve got quite the adventure ahead of them.