Recent Comments

2/23/26, 12:21 PM
What a wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more

2/23/26, 7:15 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks Man!
2/23/26, 6:15 PM
AMAZING as EVER...I love your mind, my friend <3

2/23/26, 6:59 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Thank you so much 🥰
Feb 21, 2026
2/23/26, 6:32 PM
I thought this was phenomenal. :) Keep it up, can’t wait to see the next chapter including how he uses them sexually.
Dec 11, 2025
2/23/26, 5:38 PM
i loved the story and see myself in Dave....completely....
Dec 11, 2025
12/14/25, 1:50 AM
Wow! Another masterpiece from you. I gotta say it was really hard to hold off until the end of the story 😉. You're an amazing writer!

12/14/25, 8:36 PM
@[Woweeflo](/user/show/922516) Hey thank you so much for reading and offering this sweet, sexy comment. Hmm I wonder what kind of slut Clark would make you? ;)

2/23/26, 5:38 PM
@[DadisTopped](/user/show/10031852) i'd let him make me the dumbest faggot cocksucker.....
2/23/26, 4:47 PM
The 4 chapters of this story are very hot, hotter from chapter to chapter. And the gradual change in the connection between Dave and James gets me hard more and more. But what i missed, was the development of Stan. So i think there is still a lot of hot stuff for some successors
Jan 7, 2026
2/23/26, 3:45 PM
You are a very skilles writer and this mind control incest story is one of the best i've ever read
2/23/26, 2:53 PM
Excellent!!
A passing reader
2/22/26, 12:04 PM
This is an abusive relationship, masked under the fake words of "love" and "care". The ultimatum: I "love" you so everything must be going the way of my liking and you must become my lowly inhuman object, or I will throw you away into the trashcan, no matter how loving and devoted you are - those doesn't mean shit in my relationship anyway. Sever all ties. Love you, care for you, know what's best for you, but serve all ties - the love is so inconsequential, so fake. That is manipulation and emotional abuse. Which makes me wonder how many among those master-slave, dom-sub pairs that was advertised as consensual, good-for-mental-health, loving, caring by members within bdsm community are actually like this? Saying we are willing consensual in public while uttered discreetly behind closed door: Oh loved one, dear boyfriend, be my totally depended-on-me slave, or serve all ties and leave you emotionally hollow?

2/22/26, 8:17 PM
@A passing reader It's still just a story, and nothing else should be read into it. There are many stories about way crueler things around, and we don't mind them at all. If it's sexual, some people suddenly start to become judgmental.

A passing reader
2/23/26, 5:16 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Is it? Read a story but not allowed to make conclusion about the characters in that story at all? Only "this is so good", "this is so wonderful" should be said? Watching Games of Throne and not allowed to say that Cersei is one wretched, despicable bitch? - But wait, people do say that watching that series, being judgmental. So it's just bdsm that demands a special treatment? Beside that, are you sure that what I talked about, the ultimatum and love-words in form of emotional abuse don't happen between bdsm pairings at all, ever? And if it happens, then so what? It's just a story of someone else's life on the other side of the Earth, isn't it, don't read much into it? "Sane" is part of the motto "safe, sane, consensual", aren't we suppose to acknowledge that which dom/master is actually bully/abuser in disguise?

2/23/26, 8:59 AM
@A passing reader Calm down, please. Why are you so agitated? These events in the story would not be ok in real life, there is no doubt about that. But the same is true for like 99% of the stories posted on GayCollarStories and GaySpiralStories. And it's pointless to explicitly complain about that. This always feels like you're projecting your judgment onto the author, even though you don't explicitly write it in your comment. If you'd word it something like "This was an intense fantasy, and I'm glad as this is only a fantasy..." instead of telling all of us what we already know anyway: That the relationship described is abusive and manipulative. And, hypnosis to make your victim compliant isn't? If you're uncomfortable reading about fantasies like this, I can only recommend to stay away from these sites. Also, there is a reason that most stories like this are written from the point of view of the subdued person.

A passing reader
2/23/26, 2:12 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Why am I so agitated? Because of your attempt to shut me up with the ever over-used excuse ("It's just a story") and self-victimize ("If it’s sexual, some people suddenly start to become judgmental"). Fallacy. Despite claiming me telling what all of you already know, your standard is that it must not allowed to voiced up: That the relationship described is abusive and manipulative. Because it must be kept silent, out of sight out of mind, and having it presented in text making you uncomfortable? You spin it as if I did a personal attack on the author, but if the author was already self-aware that the relationship they depicted is abusive and manipulative, then how come me acknowledging it as they intended is a form of attack? When people criticizing Cersei in Game of Thrones, that doesn't mean they're criticizing the author of the series for writing it, nor criticizing the actress for acting it. Am I uncomfortable reading about fantasies like this? Yes, I am, more or less, unless I'm the kind of guy that truly think these events in the story would be ok. Fantasizing is one thing but staying aware that those fantasies shouldn't be acted upon is another. Yet, you seem to be against that, with your attempt of silencing. You make it as if I'm being judgemental on the author, I'm not. But I'm judgemental on you.

2/23/26, 2:34 PM
@A passing reader Ok, I won't take this anymore. Don't come back. You're no longer welcome here. I don't appreciate attacks on my person. And I'm not standing for this.

2/23/26, 2:52 PM
@A passing reader jesus fucking christ dude nobody actually got hurt, you are having a completely outsized reaction to a piece of erotic fiction. this is not a healthy response and you need to back up, log off, and calm down.
2/23/26, 1:10 PM
Genuinely beautiful lol an glad to see ur continuin this great series mate!