Recent Comments

7/30/23, 10:28 PM
I approved this, but you may want to consider switching the many many black quotes used for dialogue in the story to quotation marks "like this" -- I think it would make the story easier and more enjoyable for readers to read. As it stands, I found those block quotes really took me out of the flow of the story. This is a fun concept! Nicely done!

7/31/23, 12:23 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Hello, my dear! Thank you so much for your comment. I was really thinking the same when I read again, after publishing. I will mark the cotes "this form" on next chapters. <3

7/31/23, 12:29 AM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Hi Jota! It's also possible to edit this chapter by using the Author and Reviewer panel if you like!

7/31/23, 12:37 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I'll do that as soon as possible! Thanks! <3
7/31/23, 12:33 AM
Amazing how fast he changed from agent to fuck boy. The wonders of modern science. I'd love access to such a set up and start turning out perfect lovers. The physical transformation was fast but the psychological one was a slow burn.
Nov 1, 2021
7/30/23, 11:26 PM
I can't believe you managed to get so much into so tight a story. That was seriously hot!
Anonymous
7/30/23, 11:12 PM
I live to serve the virus.
7/30/23, 10:47 PM
Hot story and really well written. Great pacing and quite a sexy arc.
Jul 30, 2023
7/30/23, 10:14 PM
Great premise! It's a fun premise and the overwhelming musky cum messing with Lucius's mind is very hot. Kyle seems to have a real problem. I hope he can find a solution to his constant cumming in large volumes.
prettyrickifag@yahoo.com
7/30/23, 10:00 PM
Oh, she sounds so pretty and so happy -- with a man's body and a girl's pussy! She is so lucky to be Taylor's bride and to be able to serve and satisfy him the rest of her life!
7/30/23, 9:43 PM
This concept is a great mix of humor and hot, love it!
Anonymous
7/30/23, 8:41 PM
Still wishing without hope,of another chapter involving the poor slutty Jimmy
7/30/23, 8:05 PM
Love this story . I hope Matthew submits and gives himself to Eddie in the end . 😊