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slavethruhypno@yaoo.com
10/15/25, 4:10 AM
Damn this is hot! Perfect Top man becomes the perfect bottom boy -- trained not just enjoy it, but to find his fulfillment in it!
Anon
10/15/25, 3:35 AM
i think you should let the AI help a little bit less... it's taking away from the story. or be more specific with your prompts. You can list out exact sequences of events and topics for them to talk about, how they respond, and even put limits on the AI. for instance, telling it not to use sentence fragments. I've noticed for almost all of Noah's lines and appearances it likes to put lines like this. "Knowing. Calculating. Like he was examining him." It's just a hallmark of AI trying to be dramatic, but it ends up being repetitive and redundant. Preferably you'd ditch the AI assistance totally. But these are some tips to make the writing more fluid and less obviously machine generated. You have to remember the AI can only build on what you provide so if you keep feeding it its own words you're going to get back regurgitation of the same material over and over.
Anonymous
10/15/25, 2:00 AM
love!
10/14/25, 8:48 PM
Fascinating! And cruel! But excellent writing. If there's more of that, I really want to read it!
Anonymous
10/14/25, 2:08 PM
I like how slowly the story develops and I disagree that it is boring. Each chapter Noah comes with something new and with each chapter the limit of what Liam would accept is pushed further and further.

10/14/25, 4:43 PM
@Anonymous yeahh dude exactly, tension and gradual changes in dynamic is what makes a story hot. appreciate you reading it!
Jan 22, 2021
blankbot
4/21/21, 5:34 PM
Wow--more, please!

10/14/25, 10:12 AM
@blankbot With @blankbot, more please. Loved the story....cuck me like that.
JoBloe
1/5/20, 9:08 PM
Good story! I would have liked more Speedo scenes and cock sucking through Speedos. Also, more descriptive butt fucking, especially with our studs in jockstraps, etc. Thanks and Happy Erotic Writing! NEMA!!! 👅

Anonymous
10/14/25, 10:05 AM
@JoBloe All your suggestions are excellent especially the jockstraps. Nothing displays an erect cock as well Nothi
10/14/25, 2:36 AM
Interesting. Will there be more?

10/14/25, 3:51 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) Yes! I have all ten chapters available on my substack but I’ll be posting them here once a week.
10/14/25, 1:49 AM
If ya gonna usa ai can you at least tag it and proof read to remove the "of course. Let me rewrite that with more detail"

Jel
10/14/25, 2:32 AM
@[Growing Hog](/user/show/543067) Tbh...