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12/18/25, 1:15 AM
This story amazingly captures those feelings of unrequited love we've all felt as teens. The descriptions are rich and vivid, like how the drone feels and smells, the glide of the rubber ring. Slow, teasing buildup, Haru's shame, shy glances, until it builds to intense sex scenes. We feel Souta's voice, lust, self-loathing, jealousy, heartbreak, strong internal conflict. The dystopian world remains subtle, draft and drones woven in naturally. The rubber drone is a perfect sex object and the contrast with our own human imperfections is a great theme: how can we even begin to compare to something so physically perfect? The rejection is strongly felt, and it stings so much when Haru realizes it's not even because of Souta's orientation. Sharp contrast between Haru's small, sensitive presence and the drone's towering apathy, also between Souta's projected casual straightness and the fact that he's fucking a male-shaped machine. Deeply kinky with genuine emotional depth.
12/17/25, 11:51 PM
i love the idea of serving a superior Man just as Rob does. i love this kind of slow-burning boyfriend to slave training, the slow but inevitable power exchange just as Rob's boyfriend, his Dominant, his Sir, his Master fully intended. There is a lot of deliberate behavior aimed at Rob to belittle and humiliate him, some of which seemed to me a touch too harsh and unnecessary given that Rob is already working hard to please the Master and His friends. Given the poor odds of finding a dominant gay boyfriend with whom a submissive boy connects so well right from the start, i can understand why rob would be reluctant to do anything to jeopardize the relationship. Their D/s connection isn't perfect, but rob seems to know as the submissive boy in the relationship, it is primarily his duty to learn to first cope with the things he doesn't like and later to flex his limits and learn to love what his Masters desires from him. The story is told from the Dominant's perspective, so tends to focus much more fully on His thoughts and feelings. As a submissive bottom boy myself hoping for a relationship something like this one, i do appreciate this perspective because it helps me better understand how a gay Dominant Alpha Male thinks and thereby helps me better understand how to serve such a Man. Also i happen to be very attracted to dominant Black Men, so this story for me is very arousing for that reason as well. @Sam - Thanks for sharing your imagination! This is likely the closest I am likely to get to find this kind of connection, which makes me even more grateful for your sharing with us.
Jakey
12/17/25, 8:54 AM
So amazing! Continuously arousing as every scene built and more and more men fell into the service of our demonic lord!

12/17/25, 9:25 PM
@Jakey Our Demonic Lord indeed!

12/17/25, 9:36 PM
@Jakey Haha thank you!
Tim
12/17/25, 9:15 PM
Every time I come back to this site and come across this story I always wondered if there would be a new installment or chapter posted…. Hoping soon that there would be a new one
12/17/25, 7:21 PM
wondering if another chapter will be made.
Dec 15, 2025
12/16/25, 7:19 AM
Holy fucking fuck that was a hot one! You took a classic concept and yet it unique and fresh. The sex scenes were amazing and the ending was *chef's kiss*. This is one of those stories where I want more but at the same time it is perfect as it is. You know what? Scratch that. I **definitely** need more of that. I loved the giving in to tops and their constant competition between themselves, especially when in the end everything was good and happy.

12/16/25, 3:49 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thank you! TBD if I write another one, but nice comments like this make me want to!

12/17/25, 6:56 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) Very well done! I hope you do write another because you can't leave a cliffhanger like that lol. I'm curious the relationship between Bryce and his uncle, if it's a rivalry of sorts, a bet that nothing would break Luke to have sex with another.
12/17/25, 6:49 PM
Wow! So so hot!! Chastity can be such a great tool for initiating, demonstrating, and maintaining dominance and control! i am convinced though that frequent edging occasionally followed by a full orgasm, more edging and forced orgasms are important to avoid diminishing libido over time. i suspect that chastity almost becomes irrelevant for control if the sub's libido drops too low. That is all my own hypothesis at least. i am so willing (excited actually) to act in the role of the submissive if there is a Dom out there who wants to test this hypothesis. Of course it would help if this Dom were an experienced Master who owns a small harem to volunteer as test subjects. The Dom (soon to be Master?!) in this story has the chops to make this happen. Having written this story, perhaps the author has a similar Alpha perspective as the story's Master. If so please feel free to contact me, Sir! In the meantime, thank you so much, Sir, for sharing your wonderful imagination!
12/13/25, 4:50 PM
Dude, Another great chapter, as was the one before this and the one before that, etc... hahaha. The psychological and physical games Noah plays with Liam are amazing and hot and sometimes hilarious to watch. Will getting fucked be a turning point for Liam? Might be hot to see him make a stand to gain back control only to get tripped up and stuck tighter in Noah's web. :muscle:

12/17/25, 5:20 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) yeah man the storys main theme is emotional and psychological manipulation! im thrilled ure enjoying it srsly!! you might actually like noahs pov too!
12/16/25, 6:09 PM
The transformations are soooo hot! I hope there'd be an "Another Eve of Becoming" story too just like Curse of Entity! ❤️

12/17/25, 3:20 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Possibly! The spirit moved on due to being able to bring happiness. That doesn’t mean that another spirit can’t do the same. :wink:

12/17/25, 4:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) OMG please do so, I'm so looking forward to it! I love your stories so much 🤩

12/17/25, 5:06 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Thank you! I’m working on another chapter of do as you’re told. Called “A New Kind of Basic Training.”
12/17/25, 1:49 AM
If he gets restored he might enjoy being cake again one day.

12/17/25, 4:57 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I should know what's gonna happen here in another chapter or two, but I think I'm gonna set this aside for a while and come back to finishing a football gear story that's been rattling around in my head for a few years. Seems to be working its way up to the front of the queue