Recent Comments

12/13/25, 4:50 PM
Dude, Another great chapter, as was the one before this and the one before that, etc... hahaha. The psychological and physical games Noah plays with Liam are amazing and hot and sometimes hilarious to watch. Will getting fucked be a turning point for Liam? Might be hot to see him make a stand to gain back control only to get tripped up and stuck tighter in Noah's web. :muscle:

12/17/25, 5:20 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) yeah man the storys main theme is emotional and psychological manipulation! im thrilled ure enjoying it srsly!! you might actually like noahs pov too!
12/16/25, 6:09 PM
The transformations are soooo hot! I hope there'd be an "Another Eve of Becoming" story too just like Curse of Entity! ❤️

12/17/25, 3:20 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Possibly! The spirit moved on due to being able to bring happiness. That doesn’t mean that another spirit can’t do the same. :wink:

12/17/25, 4:08 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) OMG please do so, I'm so looking forward to it! I love your stories so much 🤩

12/17/25, 5:06 PM
@[srrecca](/user/show/10059619) Thank you! I’m working on another chapter of do as you’re told. Called “A New Kind of Basic Training.”
12/17/25, 1:49 AM
If he gets restored he might enjoy being cake again one day.

12/17/25, 4:57 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I should know what's gonna happen here in another chapter or two, but I think I'm gonna set this aside for a while and come back to finishing a football gear story that's been rattling around in my head for a few years. Seems to be working its way up to the front of the queue
Phil
12/17/25, 4:09 PM
Damn what a great story. I would have loved to have seen all those jock studs serving those drinks in their slutty uniforms.
7/3/25, 7:22 AM
By the way, will Diego continue to produce only small amounts of cum? I'd like to see him not knowing what to do with his tiny penis (with huge balls) spurting out a huge amount of cum that he can't handle. (Or maybe piss?)

7/4/25, 7:33 AM
@[abdtiresias](/user/show/617769) I hadn't given this too much thought. I think this might be an idea for another story!

Anonymous
9/16/25, 7:49 AM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) Was that the last part?

9/16/25, 10:04 AM
@Anonymous It will continue! Its a bit of juggle balancing life and writing, but it will get done 😊

12/17/25, 3:55 PM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) thank you for the writing....so hot ...i felt as if i was becoming the servant....so horny for it.
Phil
12/17/25, 3:23 PM
Wow what an incredible story man. Wondering if he will ever met the guy who “ruined” his wishes. I wish I had the app and could make some changes myself. Grrrr Thanks for sharing and btw it’s extremely well written.
12/17/25, 2:53 PM
i love this story....being turned into a puppet turns me on hugely. thank you for writing.
12/17/25, 1:30 PM
Please make one about Pablo becoming a dog!!
12/17/25, 1:26 PM
Wow. You literally did every single thing I could have asked for. It was so incredibly hot you would just the best trailer on here and seem to always take all my boxes. Can't wait for the next one and hopefully won't have to wait for long.
JustAthought
10/29/25, 7:49 PM
I wonder if people would have found the story just as hot if there was a colour/ethnicity swap (asian dom, black sub for example). If it would change the hotness it would definitely say something.

12/17/25, 10:29 AM
@JustAthought Interesting thought. i am a submissive white bottom boy. i love diversity; i think all the differences between races, enthnicities, and cultures make life more interesting. For some reason i relish submitting to and serving Men of other races, ethnicities and/or cultures from myself. While i would be happy with the opportunity to serve most Dominant Men, i innately and unconsciously put myself in a story as a white submissive/slave. Naturally though i also have aesthetic and other psychological preferences. First my general interest in diversity also applies more specifically to men different from myself. Thus i tend to prefer stories in which the Dom is non-white and the submissive is white. That said i find it fairly easy to focus on the aspects of a story which most arouse me and mostly ignore others. So if the sub in the story was some race other than white, i might simply ignore that aspect of the story. i suppose the bottom line to your question is: a color/ethnicity swap might affect my enjoyment of a story to some extent. So, JustAthought, if you asked that question about a swap, you must have thought about your own answer to that question. i wonder why you didn't offer your personal thoughts about your own response. ;)