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12/27/25, 12:42 AM
Deine Stories werden immer besser. Gefällt mir! Weiter so!!
12/26/25, 12:37 PM
Continue please...

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) We will! :)
12/26/25, 2:51 AM
I really(!) hope there’s another chapter here. This story has been so hot and yet heart wrenching. It’s interesting the System brought Five to Souta intentionally, but surely that means the System has a plan for how to reunite the two?

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Further chapters are already in the making/ready for release! :)
12/26/25, 8:21 PM
Really great story and hot as hell. I’m really loving this one. Great job
12/26/25, 7:21 PM
I don't read Spanish, but deepL translator works great. Hot story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Principal Brown has planned for the big hunky coach? :muscle:
12/26/25, 4:38 PM
I think Ash and Hank's friendship is over
12/26/25, 4:35 PM
This story is so hot and so well-written. Love the worldbuilding and MC’s POV, too. Top’s POV, horny muscle bottom daddies - push all my buttons why don’t ya, lol And then you add in different types of powers, too. Can’t wait to see where your dirty, creative mind takes things!
12/26/25, 6:44 AM
I am a huge fan of stage hypnosis stories, and this one did not disappoint! Great work, and congrats on getting your first story out there!

12/26/25, 3:23 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thank you! Glad it did not disappoint, Your stage hypnosis stories are incredible. I actually use some of them as references for this one! I just still don't brave enough (yet) to incorporate multiple subjects like you did. catch you on the next one ;)
Dec 25, 2020
12/26/25, 3:05 PM
That was a fun and hot story. Thanks for sharing.
12/26/25, 12:22 PM
Hot!