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12/26/25, 7:52 PM
Loving this story! It seems Ash is destined to become a "real" slave...but it would be interesting to see if professor has some surprises in store that change the outcome.

12/27/25, 7:13 AM
@[Fex180](/user/show/10002263) Agreed. Needs a twist where Ash, and the other slaves, get to reverse it all on the masters and do what was done to them or more.
GWR
12/26/25, 7:30 PM
Very hot story. One bit of confusion - when he drops his trousers, you write “ athan pushed trousers and briefs down over his hips”, but later say he is wearing boxers. In English, briefs and boxers are two different types of underwear and it’s unlikely someone would wear both, especially boxers under briefs as required by the order here. I assume he’s just wearing boxers, as that works with the staining the underwear during his milking experience. A minor detail that doesn’t detract from the store. I look forward to seeing what Arin does next with Nathan’s mind and body

12/27/25, 3:32 AM
@[GWR](/user/show/10010412) Thank you, and also thank you for pointing that out. I was planning to make Nathan straight up nakkie but changed my mind during the Edit. I guess my dylexic brain kicked in and not noticing the inconsistency. I already submitted my revision. Thank you again. I'm working on the next chapter. I already have few opening pharagraphs. ;)
12/27/25, 1:19 AM
Great story! Love the covert hypnosis and that ending was god damn hot!! 🔥

12/27/25, 2:44 AM
@[Mexfuck](/user/show/186241) Thank you very much :smile:
12/27/25, 1:30 AM
i admit to being a big fan of power exchange. I am a little picky about non-consensual power exchange. i am fine if the process takes some time, proceeds in small incremental consensual activities, which together may constitute a vague consent for further power exchange, and ends with the submissive being at least content with his new lot in life. i still rather enjoyed the story, but for me the story was too short and went too far too fast.
12/27/25, 12:42 AM
Deine Stories werden immer besser. Gefällt mir! Weiter so!!
12/26/25, 12:37 PM
Continue please...

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) We will! :)
12/26/25, 2:51 AM
I really(!) hope there’s another chapter here. This story has been so hot and yet heart wrenching. It’s interesting the System brought Five to Souta intentionally, but surely that means the System has a plan for how to reunite the two?

12/26/25, 10:38 PM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Further chapters are already in the making/ready for release! :)
12/26/25, 8:21 PM
Really great story and hot as hell. I’m really loving this one. Great job
12/26/25, 7:21 PM
I don't read Spanish, but deepL translator works great. Hot story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Principal Brown has planned for the big hunky coach? :muscle:
12/26/25, 4:38 PM
I think Ash and Hank's friendship is over