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9/17/22, 7:52 PM
Statement withdrawn

9/17/22, 8:18 PM
@Stroppy Author Hello, thank you very much for commenting, all comments and constructive criticism are welcome and I appreciate them very much. First of all, it means a lot to me that you think it's well written. Being English my non-native language, I try very hard to do quality work for all of you, and I'm glad to know you think so. Oh, man, I’m surprised, I honestly didn't think the story was so dark and hopeless! I thought I'd managed to make clear Kyle’s guilty pleasure he’s experiencing, and that a big part of what's happening to him is so tortuous, because in some degree that he refuses to admit to himself, he's actually enjoying in part what's going on, and that he’s definitely having the best sex he ever had. That was my intention in chapter 12 with the meeting of the three Kyles: the conflict between his morality, his reality and his animal instincts. I'm sorry I have not been clear on that. This is my first story, so I totally accept that it may have flaws like that. And in fact some of what you’re saying (the enjoyment of the victims) appears better explores in chapter 14, which I’m already working on. But of course I take the criticism, and I respect your decision not to continue reading it. I will keep all of that in mind. Again, thanks a lot for the feedback, buddy!

11/30/25, 1:26 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) It's a pity there is no continuation 😔 Is it possible to read this story somewhere? Do you publish it in your language anywhere?

@Plymouth58
12/3/25, 1:29 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Hi! I'm so sorry I haven't been able to continue the story. It's incredible that so much time has passed; it's the biggest writer's block I've ever had. The worst part is, I know how the story goes, I know what I want to write, but I've reached the point where I'm bogged down in a major plot point, and I'm terribly stuck. I think being left to write alone without any extra support is what got me stuck. I must have written a dozen variations already, but it's really complicated because the story keeps going in the wrong direction. Believe me, I'm trying to get back on track, but oh, it's so difficult! The job change from employee to freelancer hasn't made things any easier either; I used to write on my way to work. I'm still working on the next chapterl, but I can't seem to develop talk between Terry and T-Bone properly. It's really the ending of the first act and the start of the second one, where things get terribly out of control for the heroes, so it had to be made well. I'm confident that by fixing that, I'll be able to continue.

12/11/25, 5:51 PM
@@Plymouth58 Forget the story, man. I'm just glad you're ok. I thought you were a late case of Covid. I hope you stay well.

Plymouth58
12/27/25, 4:49 PM
@[Superbelt](/user/show/212229) Thanks a lot for your concern! It was a complicated year, especially the second half of it. But luckly I'm fine, out of an annoying winter flu. I've posted a new story, that you may like, so go and take a look at it! Best regards, bro!
12/13/25, 5:39 PM
Mate, You're a powerful writer and it's always a pleasure to read your works. All is good. Just doing the clean up from my last round of treatments. Not many talk about what the surgeries, grafts and rehab required after treatment. Prolly a reason I'm so affected by a story line or plot. These are my "escape Rooms" from reality. Please don't try and tailor your stories to what you think one or even a few would like. Seeing your fantasies and story lines lets us all see the works with fresh eyes. And of flaws: reassurance this isn't an AI story. Keep it up!

Plymouth58
12/27/25, 4:44 PM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) Aww, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad to know my stories bring you some joy during dark times. I hope everything gets better for you soon, that you make a full recovery next year, and that you enjoy good health from 2026 onwards. I've made a new post with a new short story, which I hope you enjoy. And thanks a lot for appeciate the value of human flaws. I would never use AI on my work, I assure you. Fuck AI! Sending you a big hug and my best wishes to you.
12/27/25, 4:39 PM
Amazing! I love it...
12/12/25, 8:53 PM
This is SOOOOO perfect. You never miss 🥰

12/27/25, 3:55 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I AGREE! I love the storytelling in this - with the chapters. Its so exciting and interesting ... and keeps me so entertained!
12/27/25, 3:21 PM
me encantan tus historias y esta no es la excepción c: ojala continúes escribiendo!!!!
12/27/25, 3:11 PM
So hot!!! And very well-written!:heart_eyes:
12/27/25, 3:10 PM
So hot!! Loved it!!!
12/27/25, 3:04 PM
Hot!
12/27/25, 2:38 PM
How the mighty have fallen
12/27/25, 2:29 PM
WELL DONE ... and wonderfully written. It is wildly erotic and exciting because I love all the hypnotic phrases and the references to smells. It is so wonderful. I loved it.