Recent Comments

12/23/25, 12:40 AM
I quite enjoy this story even though im not a football fan. Love that Andrew still have his humanity and he still doubt in using his new powers. I cant wait to read where he would use his magic touch more. I hope he mind control more (straight) guys into having gay sex with him, athlete or rich or regular guys.

1/3/26, 6:50 PM
Hey, sorry for leaving you on read for so long. Thank you for your comment. In the next chapter, Andrew is a little bit more selfish and has less doubt about using his power, but there is also a new sense of novelty to it. Hope you like it
1/3/26, 6:01 PM
Oh man do I love this story. Its soooo good. So fun and sexy. Love it!
Jan 2, 2026
1/3/26, 4:18 PM
I love the twist of Jason trying to stop the jock invasion, completely unaware that he’s become a horny jock too. Here's hoping for some more chapters. I think there's room to expand on the story.

Anonymous
1/3/26, 4:49 PM
@[muscle growth man](/user/show/10040653) Glad you liked it! I was inspired by the many ai generated pics of muscle dudes on deviant.com. Honestly don’t have a good idea of where to go from here. I hope other writers can pick up the story!
1/2/26, 2:25 AM
A predictable story line… in a good way. well woven story and looking forward to at least five more chapters!

1/3/26, 4:19 PM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) I'm hoping for at least ten more chapters. :laughing:
1/2/26, 6:03 PM
Nice build up for what's to come. Can't wait to see how Felix and Colin end up entangled in these hypnotic webs.

1/3/26, 3:18 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thank you! And yesss, I can't wait to reveal what's going to happen to them (including their relationship) to the readers. :D stay tuned
1/3/26, 1:32 PM
I love the persuasion... and the conflict... and the emotion... and all the references to the man smells and tastes... THANK YOU. WOW
1/3/26, 10:15 AM
Chris should have said "Huh, yeah, let it out, faggot" as John came. Like poetry. And it is a cute reality-shifting detail that his big tough dog becomes a little Pomeranian too.
1/3/26, 9:30 AM
Vielen Dank für den Hinweis. Zu meiner Entschuldigung: Ich hatte ab dem 4. Advent Probleme beim Sehen, was die Fehlerquote nicht begünstigt hat. Ich habe das nicht erlebt, ich versuche mich aber in die Charaktere zu versetzen. Und ja mein Stil hat sich seit meinen Anfängen hier verändert, wenn das zur Lesbarkeit beiträgt, nehme ich das gerne als Kompliment an. Und keine Angst: Der nächste Teil ist bereits im Kopf, ich brauche nur genug Zeit es in Worte und Sätze zu packen.
Dec 30, 2025
1/3/26, 7:18 AM
The experience of him feeling the adjustments being made was so satisfying. Great work.
Jan 2, 2026
1/3/26, 3:46 AM
Oooooh, a classic muscles up, brains down transformation story, complete with oblivious transformations. I love how the narration reflects Jason's own mental changes, and the ending is a great set-up for a continuation. Excellent--and very hot--work. :D