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GayCop2
1/2/26, 10:45 PM
Hey, I check my email and could use a deep throat and tongue with lips on mine!
1/2/26, 9:50 PM
Very nice!
1/2/26, 9:45 PM
Short but powerful story. First time reading that I feel the urge to be dominated like Peter. Very well written and hope to read more from **HMSL**
1/2/26, 8:37 PM
I'm really looking forward to what happens next
1/2/26, 8:06 PM
Du schreibst wunderbar einfühlsam und man hat in jedem Satz das Gefühl, dass Du selbst das alles erlebt hast. Und Du wirst mit jeder Geschichte besser! Nur solltest Du ab nochmal Drüberlesen (oder mit einem Tool kontrollieren lassen), an mindestens zwei Stellen hast Du ein oder mehrere Worte unterschlagen: "Nach wenigen Sekunden waren Schmerzen seine prallen Bälle und die Nippel wurden steinhart. " "Patricks wurden schmal und er zuckte mit den Schultern." Und bitte schreib unbedingt weiter!
1/2/26, 6:48 PM
Looking forward to taking more league members- green lantern (any one), aquaman, flash, even plastic-man. Even having the boys play with each other while waiting their turn to be used again. A new team dynamic training
1/2/26, 3:45 AM
The longer this tale continues the more it becomes like a greek tragedy; star crossed lovers separated then reunited through unlikely circumstances, only to be torn apart again. This chapter took a much more obvertly dark tone compared to those previous as well, very much playing into the utopia/dystopia themes. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what you have in store for our central pair and the peppering of other characters now in their orbit as this grand narrative concludes.

1/2/26, 6:26 PM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Thank you, Phillip! I truly love your comment; it means that we did something right!
1/2/26, 2:38 PM
Please keep going!

Anonymous
1/2/26, 6:24 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) There are 11 more months to come
1/2/26, 6:23 PM
Excellent writing as always!
1/2/26, 3:36 AM
So this is what hayato has been up to. He seems content bit it's slightly eerie knowing that he doesn't care much to see his family again. Still, perhaps the system gave him a reason he accepted for this. He did show pity to Souta as well by not implementing the full extent of what the system wanted. Which is interesting...wonder what that might cause. Something tells me this isn't the end for souta or haru.. will they meet up with each other as drones? And what of souta's father? Surely he may revisit the idea he dismissed as a conspiracy? It's tragic that souta felt so angry and afraid but I can see why. But is he completely gone now?

1/2/26, 6:19 PM
@[Anon-966](/user/show/10049352) We're delighted that you're so engaged in the story. This is a major motivation! So thank you for that! Hayato is not entirely himself any longer - the System has changed him. He is aware, and he does care for his old family to a degree - but the System is now his family. But more importantly, he doesn't see Heru's fate as something negative. He actually envies him because, in his eyes, being an AN-Drone is the pinnacle of existence. Stay tuned to learn if this is going to stay like this, and what's going to happen to the boys and their parents... :)