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2/28/26, 5:51 PM
Thanks enjoyed this and your other works.
Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:57 PM
I agree with everyone else. Great start and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting this!
2/28/26, 3:54 PM
Truly amazing
Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:46 PM
Really thrilled to see another series from you! This was a great chapter and I'm very excited for the next part.
DD
2/28/26, 3:24 PM
Two tops in the bedroom... hmm this is going to go well lol. I love this, great start, looking forward to seeing more.
2/28/26, 1:24 PM
I have rarely anticipated new chapters to a story like the one you're building here. It is so damn good.
2/28/26, 9:33 AM
OK, truth be told, Chapter 5 left me preparing to abandon the whole enterprise. The pace was frenetic and your like for quick transformations was in hyper drive. But as Bill said: " I’m not going to pretend it doesn’t turn me on.” Yet, something seemed off in your writing. I was getting stressed out because you seemed to have turned against your characters. I went back to Chapter 5 and reread it and still felt something was misfiring. Then, came Chapter 6 which came like the transformation it was meant to be. The pace was, slow and romantic. The characters were humanized even while living a fantasy. The mood was mellow. You got me to love Bill's easy charm. With the expanded length, you even made Stench more interesting human. Chapter 5 and 6 are clearly the work of the same person, but Chapter 5 seemed to be written out of duty. Chapter 6 taps into something personal and as a result it put the story back on track, at least for me. Chapter 6 reads like a complete story in and of itself, and is a solid piece of composition in any genre. It's too late to change the narrative of speedy transformations for this story, but I'm convinced that you can achieve a great story keeping things on the plane of reality, not magic. Keep it up. You're a wild ass of a talent that expect to produce some classic queer tales.

2/28/26, 12:42 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Thanks for taking the time to write out what you were thinking. I will put some thought into how best to rewrite Chapter 5 and slow it down, get into the characters’ heads. Looking at it now, yeah, I can see how it felt rushed. Thanks again!
2/27/26, 10:06 PM
Your story fullfill my deepest desire to have a pussy instead of my useless microdick. Although I know it will always be just a dream, this wonderful, positive love story allowed me to believe in it for a while, and for that, I am grateful. I hope to have the chance to read more of your stories!

2/28/26, 10:12 AM
@[LowDesertDad](/user/show/10069349) So glad you enjoyed it. I've got a number of stories on here, none of them exactly the same... mainly because I've tried to nail the fantasy in one go and not feel like I need to keep returning to it. But there are definitely ones about being a big muscle bottom with a tiny dick and loving it., and there are ones about being a fit muscle bro and being transferred into a woman's body with a real life pussy... I think you might enjoy those too.
Willie Cici
2/28/26, 3:32 AM
Loved the first chapter. Can't wait for the next.
2/26/26, 4:30 PM
I love the slow transformation, how he fights yet is accepting of his role. How horny and correct it’s making him feel. Would be amazing if he learnt how to chauffeur

Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:30 AM
@[ArcherUK](/user/show/2248631) Agreed - especially with the right hat! (or maybe full traditional uniform)