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6/3/24, 6:29 PM
Like OMG, so tantalizing n oh so sexy hot thoughts running amuck
6/3/24, 6:12 PM
Mmmm yummy delightments in store
6/3/24, 5:44 PM
I liked when he told him he loved him. 🥹
6/1/24, 11:06 AM
Can't wait for the baboon trigger to be used :D

6/2/24, 5:16 AM
@[MindlessDog](/user/show/10009228) Haha tbh wasn't expecting that one to come up here in the comments yet. But I'm glad I could give you something to look forward to!

6/3/24, 5:11 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) What can I say. I love naked men being dumbed down to an animalistic level :D
6/3/24, 12:54 PM
impossible to read it, I should delete it, generate it in word and republish it

6/3/24, 1:19 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) My edit just got approved. I hope it displays correctly for you now, as I can see it with the line breaks and properly formatted.
5/31/24, 8:35 PM
This was a hot and sexy story!

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I knew you’d like this one, too! Glad you read it.
5/27/24, 5:31 AM
Sexy and lighthearted, and wonderfully capturing the allure or porn scripts. And it’s fun to be in the head of a roleplayer, walking that rope between cheesy acting and keeping the horniness up. Great job, really. And thanks so much for gifting us with your stories

6/3/24, 12:50 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I appreciate every time you comment! It feels good to have almost a “regular” who sees a Soren Fitz story and knows “oh yeah that’s gonna be fun,” heh, and comments are always a gift to me. But yeah, getting into the head of a roleplayer was a blast. Time taught me a lot about that mindset so I could write this, and I felt like it added something really fun, interesting, and unique to the scene that I hoped would make it possibly more immersive than even pure porn logic, because there was a reason for the top’s surreal dialogue and actions. Glad it was fun!
5/25/24, 9:02 PM
Another outstanding work, Soren! You nailed that almost-otherworldly fantasy vibe that porn provides that we all buy into, the suspension of disbelief and just rolling with it. Concurred with some of the other commenters - great pick of references, you have good taste! Can't wait to see what other porny scenarios you can think up, and I'll be there to read 'em! ;)

6/3/24, 12:45 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, it’s the “rolling with it” that was so vital to the fantasy here. As long as Marco, the POV, acts like the situation is normal, so can the readers—and even the little “shocks to the system” where the fantasy is revealed to be just a roleplay don’t have to affect that feeling of normality. As easily as you can pause your porn vid and respond to a message on your phone, so you can step out of the fantasy for a moment and then step back in.
5/25/24, 7:24 AM
Loved this, but especially the back and forth erotic plumber talk and that Marco’s reference model is the sexy, bubble butt, big titty Jess Mesino himself! Always imagined Mesino (Marco) having his pipes pumped full of cum, but this was a nice change of pace!

6/3/24, 12:39 PM
@[Sky Larkin](/user/show/10011200) I don’t know why but Jess Mesino just has this really great _dad_ vibe that I felt could really get him into a dom mood! I def think his ass deserves to be used, maybe by his young blond trainee. Not sure which POV to write that from, though. Glad you enjoyed the dialogue, too! I worked really hard on it. Before Time’s help, it was basically one singular metaphor about clogged pipes that got boring and old fast, but I was able to diversify it a lot more in the end.