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Fet Dreams
2/28/26, 9:55 PM
I'll be to the point - as with your anal slut here - my anus is my core and it being raped and toyed with makes my spermings insanely addictive, far more intense (legs buckle and won't work) and my sperm go much longer. I'd love to have this suppository of yours 🥵! A fun, erection-inducing read 🍆🍆🍆🥛🫦!
2/28/26, 9:28 PM
Oh, I already have a few ideas of where _this_ is going, I can't wait to see! Great intro, got me excited for what's next. I know from Zack's perspective it's annoying, but I love those subtle casual displays of masculine confidence in a partner myself. So Mase sounds like a dream to me!
Jul 27, 2024
Fet Dreams
2/28/26, 8:53 PM
I was erect and edging once you got to the spear and machine moment. Love that you included some stiff-nipple masturbation. I'm blessed to have nympho-sensitive hardened nipples that can easily be masturbated and raped to sperm-spurting nipplegasms. Really wish more effeminizing cock-hungry faggot fetish had a focus on hyper-sensitive hardened nipples. That the aliens understand mind-rape via "The Voice" and conditioning, triggering perversion words and phrases is supreme. I love that you included the psychology of the futiley resisting rapetois! Really increased my arousal, knowing they were me when my time cums. How, once broken, I'd be a true rape, cock, sperm and submissive rapeslut. Broken. Controlled. FORCIBLY converted. And being eternally aroused with only a turgid chub erection had me edging myself harder because... my most insane spermings are when I'm semi-hard and experiencing nipplegasms or analgasms. There's a unique quality to ejacuating semi-soft. And zero refractory period so these raping, transforming men into sissyfied analrape sluts can keep devastating me and us endlessly when they choose. This was so imaginative in a fetish fantasy way and had me aching to be sucked into your alien universe and converted to a cock-hungry, sperm-thirsty, bondage-needy, rettyfied sissyfaggot, ravenous for fetish debasement 🥴!
2/28/26, 5:51 PM
Thanks enjoyed this and your other works.
Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:57 PM
I agree with everyone else. Great start and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting this!
2/28/26, 3:54 PM
Truly amazing
Anonymous
2/28/26, 3:46 PM
Really thrilled to see another series from you! This was a great chapter and I'm very excited for the next part.
DD
2/28/26, 3:24 PM
Two tops in the bedroom... hmm this is going to go well lol. I love this, great start, looking forward to seeing more.
2/28/26, 1:24 PM
I have rarely anticipated new chapters to a story like the one you're building here. It is so damn good.
2/28/26, 9:33 AM
OK, truth be told, Chapter 5 left me preparing to abandon the whole enterprise. The pace was frenetic and your like for quick transformations was in hyper drive. But as Bill said: " I’m not going to pretend it doesn’t turn me on.” Yet, something seemed off in your writing. I was getting stressed out because you seemed to have turned against your characters. I went back to Chapter 5 and reread it and still felt something was misfiring. Then, came Chapter 6 which came like the transformation it was meant to be. The pace was, slow and romantic. The characters were humanized even while living a fantasy. The mood was mellow. You got me to love Bill's easy charm. With the expanded length, you even made Stench more interesting human. Chapter 5 and 6 are clearly the work of the same person, but Chapter 5 seemed to be written out of duty. Chapter 6 taps into something personal and as a result it put the story back on track, at least for me. Chapter 6 reads like a complete story in and of itself, and is a solid piece of composition in any genre. It's too late to change the narrative of speedy transformations for this story, but I'm convinced that you can achieve a great story keeping things on the plane of reality, not magic. Keep it up. You're a wild ass of a talent that expect to produce some classic queer tales.

2/28/26, 12:42 PM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Thanks for taking the time to write out what you were thinking. I will put some thought into how best to rewrite Chapter 5 and slow it down, get into the characters’ heads. Looking at it now, yeah, I can see how it felt rushed. Thanks again!