Recent Comments

1/11/26, 4:52 PM
Wow!! Is there going to be more of this? 😃🫣
1/11/26, 2:08 AM
Spectacular!!

1/11/26, 4:06 PM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thank you.
1/11/26, 5:54 AM
Fuck this was hot, i can’t wait to see what happens next specially to the football team

1/11/26, 4:05 PM
@[ArielZagreus](/user/show/10040716) I'd have to say the football team would make a powerful addition to the demon army.
1/11/26, 3:15 AM
Will there be a next episode? I’m really looking forward to it

1/11/26, 4:01 PM
@[Jiu_MH](/user/show/10000387) When I wrote this story, I had considered making it a series, but I really don't have another chapter in mind. However, if you have any ideas for a continuation, please let me know.
1/11/26, 3:39 PM
Hello, if you've read the story elsewhere, know that I'm posting a revised version here that you won't find elsewhere yet, except gayauthors.
1/10/26, 5:32 PM
Vote: Play it cool Is there an alternative way you want us to vote besides comment? I'm not sure I'm seeing any other way but the number/letter string makes me question it.

1/11/26, 2:31 PM
@[Sieg](/user/show/9699) I'm not currently aware of any proper voting mechanisms on this site, but luv seeing what choices y'all's prefer. Definitely drop some votes down here for which paths you wanna see (who knows, maybe I'll prioritize that strand's development...)
1/1/26, 7:55 PM
This is an amazing story, the most intense and realistic dronification story I've ever read. A deep insight into the dronespace, yet untainted by the usual over-the-top fantastic settings.

1/1/26, 7:57 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) One criticism I'd like to add though: Please add more paragraphs. They make reading so much easier. Usually with every new thought, every new event and each time another person starts to speak, you also start a new paragraph.

1/11/26, 12:21 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Hey, thanks for the great feedback! This is my first post here, and I'm still learning the system a bit.

1/11/26, 2:30 PM
@[Pup_geo](/user/show/10069516) If you allow, I will reformat the second chapter myself. It's almost unreadable in this state. Or you try it yourself. Remember, to start a new paragraph you need to add an empty line between the two paragraphs.
Gaz
1/10/26, 10:41 AM
Hey I really like your writing style, and I love a game reality change story. It’s obvious you have a clear idea who your characters are. As a reader, I’m finding it hard to keep 9 characters in my head. Also, with a choose your own adventure style, you may want to publish a block/thread of chapters at the same time. This is possible using the “Publish on” field. You can select a date more than 7 days from when you publish them (giving the volunteer approval team time to do their magic). Just a suggestions, keep writing, can’t wait to see where this is heading.

1/11/26, 2:19 PM
@[Gaz](/user/show/365297) Really super appreciate this; 9 is a bit much isn't it...hoping to create enough isolating/individualized situations to keep 'em all relevant and cohesive; also hoping to emphasize dif characters and dynamics w/ the many dif story strands...will def keep you readers in mind tho :) That's a great publishing idea (like holy tysm); much is already written so will def employ this! Hope you enjoy
1/11/26, 1:38 PM
Ooh i like that he madr Alfred stronger and daddier.
1/11/26, 1:17 PM
Thanks very much for your likes, ratings and messages of support. Where possible, I try to take your suggestions onboard, so Alex the next chapter is entitled 'Submissive Smoking' and has just been sent off for publishing on 11 January, so hopefully it will be ready ready to read by the 15th. Titan is one of the great innovators and story-tellers on this site, so please enjoy his work, if you haven't already!