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1/10/26, 5:32 PM
Vote: Play it cool Is there an alternative way you want us to vote besides comment? I'm not sure I'm seeing any other way but the number/letter string makes me question it.

1/11/26, 2:31 PM
@[Sieg](/user/show/9699) I'm not currently aware of any proper voting mechanisms on this site, but luv seeing what choices y'all's prefer. Definitely drop some votes down here for which paths you wanna see (who knows, maybe I'll prioritize that strand's development...)
1/1/26, 7:55 PM
This is an amazing story, the most intense and realistic dronification story I've ever read. A deep insight into the dronespace, yet untainted by the usual over-the-top fantastic settings.

1/1/26, 7:57 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) One criticism I'd like to add though: Please add more paragraphs. They make reading so much easier. Usually with every new thought, every new event and each time another person starts to speak, you also start a new paragraph.

1/11/26, 12:21 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Hey, thanks for the great feedback! This is my first post here, and I'm still learning the system a bit.

1/11/26, 2:30 PM
@[Pup_geo](/user/show/10069516) If you allow, I will reformat the second chapter myself. It's almost unreadable in this state. Or you try it yourself. Remember, to start a new paragraph you need to add an empty line between the two paragraphs.
Gaz
1/10/26, 10:41 AM
Hey I really like your writing style, and I love a game reality change story. It’s obvious you have a clear idea who your characters are. As a reader, I’m finding it hard to keep 9 characters in my head. Also, with a choose your own adventure style, you may want to publish a block/thread of chapters at the same time. This is possible using the “Publish on” field. You can select a date more than 7 days from when you publish them (giving the volunteer approval team time to do their magic). Just a suggestions, keep writing, can’t wait to see where this is heading.

1/11/26, 2:19 PM
@[Gaz](/user/show/365297) Really super appreciate this; 9 is a bit much isn't it...hoping to create enough isolating/individualized situations to keep 'em all relevant and cohesive; also hoping to emphasize dif characters and dynamics w/ the many dif story strands...will def keep you readers in mind tho :) That's a great publishing idea (like holy tysm); much is already written so will def employ this! Hope you enjoy
1/11/26, 1:38 PM
Ooh i like that he madr Alfred stronger and daddier.
1/11/26, 1:17 PM
Thanks very much for your likes, ratings and messages of support. Where possible, I try to take your suggestions onboard, so Alex the next chapter is entitled 'Submissive Smoking' and has just been sent off for publishing on 11 January, so hopefully it will be ready ready to read by the 15th. Titan is one of the great innovators and story-tellers on this site, so please enjoy his work, if you haven't already!
Jan 9, 2026
Elm
1/11/26, 4:16 AM
It's a neat first try I think, I can certainly feel the enthusiasm! And I VERY much like the themes :3 Above all, thanks for sharing! Believe me I get how hard it can be.
1/11/26, 1:24 AM
Damn what a chapter. Why do i want Agent Tony to be part of his "family" aswell. Maybe he could be a below or slave by Farrow and then Farrow would be back. And wow, that gym scene is so hot. I wonder who snitched about the giant orgy. Maybe a passerby or late student/audience saw whats happening and freaked out. And so Ethan does bottom. So maybe a shapeshifted Derek or Farrow would top him that would be hot. And for his family, and the implications of them being released from his manipulation, i wonder what would happen if Ethan escapes. Hmm.
1/8/26, 11:06 AM
Would be fun to the class take a trip to visit a slave processing centre, maybe the new slaves could feel what it’s like to be properly processed into permanent slaves… jus to give them a taste

1/11/26, 1:04 AM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) agreed i would love that.
1/10/26, 11:06 PM
Great and well-written story, thank you. Hot too. As a submissive myself who has experimented with chastity cages I could relate to it. Look forward to future chapters.
1/9/26, 12:54 AM
Your story really gets me going!! I have read it several times over the last several days. Each read I get rock solid & can not help cumming. I am glad your story is not cursed like the video!

1/9/26, 1:30 AM
@[3684](/user/show/10054325) awww, i love to hear that. thanks for reading. and multiple times, wow! 🪄🪄🪄

1/10/26, 12:30 AM
@[Sorcerer-Boy](/user/show/10014733) Could your arm be twisted to write more about the cursed video? I would love to read more!! Whether about Chris, the current victim, or others who watch the video. It’s a very erotic piece!!!

1/10/26, 7:39 PM
@[3684](/user/show/10054325) That's very kind! If I had infinite time (or infinite money), I'd get to spend more time on this stuff. But alas. Much other writing and working to be done :(