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1/12/26, 11:41 AM
This is a wonderful story! Of course it reminded me of Brain Feed, but whereas that story is told in "prose," this story (The cumUNITY) has a very definite musical rhythm to it. The repetitions create a rhythm which, when combined with the narrative creates a marvelous pacing. I've never read mature James Joyce, but there's such a wonderful tension created by the juxtaposition of the stream of conscious as the narrator tries to frequently reassure himself that things are ok whereas the reader suspects and knows the inevitable. (And yes, while and after reading it I had to relieve myself because it's so arousing.) Bravo rubbrsome for your very unique vision and your superlative way of expressing and sharing it!
1/12/26, 8:39 AM
Impatiently waiting for the follow-up. :hot_face:

1/12/26, 11:38 AM
@[datadog](/user/show/438402) Good boy; already on its way 😈
1/12/26, 10:12 AM
This unit has never read the original Brain Feed to its recollection, but it did enjoy this story a lot. :)

1/12/26, 11:34 AM
@[DNK-094321](/user/show/10037283) I'm sure many will agree that [Brain Feed](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/1670) is one of the best and most original stories on this site.
1/12/26, 11:24 AM
Hot. And primal energy
1/11/26, 6:55 AM
Hot stuff!

1/12/26, 10:49 AM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) 😈😈😈
1/10/26, 9:20 PM
Hot story, can't wait or more!

1/12/26, 10:48 AM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) Already on its way… 😈
1/10/26, 9:01 PM
Love a good corruption story. This is hot. It did get a bit confusing as to who was speaking in the middle, almost like Colt and Gideon’s names got switched. But maybe that’s just me. Can’t wait for more!

1/12/26, 10:48 AM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) Thanks; I found the paragraph you meant and fixed it!
1/11/26, 11:16 AM
I was not expecting another chapter.

1/12/26, 8:05 AM
@[Cerbie101!](/user/show/10029028) Sorry for the long wait! Had to focus on life for a bit. Still am, but had the time to post another chapter. And don't worry, I'll let my readers know if I ever stop writing. Feel it's only right.
1/12/26, 6:04 AM
Super hot please continue
1/9/26, 7:23 PM
This story seems to have a lot of elements from the “Master Y” series on this site. Don’t get me wrong both are great stories but it’s odd they are so similar

1/10/26, 4:59 AM
@[Speaksga](/user/show/964546) Where can I find the story you describe?

1/10/26, 9:40 AM
@[cjayerick](/user/show/10005597) The story is here https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10005773

1/11/26, 4:50 AM
@[Speaksga](/user/show/964546) It's a fairly classic trope in the reprogramming genre! I do love seeing these kinds of stories done well, and this one is so far!

1/12/26, 2:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I suppose it may be, but its also following the other story beat for beat. The same rules. The same shower meetings. Etc.