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10/28/25, 9:36 PM
You know a story is good when you think "Man, this is so damn good" while reading :grin: You never disappoint! Nobody does classic hypno like you do. I was not expecting the big and arrogant jock to be put to whine and cry. I'm usually not that much into that kind of things, but the way you introduced it made it so hot! :fire: All the training in sucking was really sexy too, especially mixed with the obliviousness. Taking Rico and focusing on the man's big pecs was definitely a great addition. In my humble opinion, I think the story doesn't need any more follow-up. I'm happy with being able to read it as many times as I want. All your independent works are great anyways ;)

10/28/25, 10:09 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thank you! This is such a nice comment! I agree, I'm not usually into the whining/crying/sissy kind of stuff, either -- except apparently when I am, lol. This is why it's good to write your own stories, you always know exactly what you're looking for! ;) I'm just glad to seems to be vibing with some other people, too!
Anonymous
10/28/25, 9:20 PM
This is so fucking hot… please keep going, you’ve done an amazing job with this series. Feel like what you did for day 21 could be a whole story of its own too…
10/28/25, 6:56 PM
Can't wait to see where this is going, im intrigued to see what dad's main goal is
10/24/25, 8:59 PM
Nice work you did here

10/28/25, 5:21 PM
@[Drew-7](/user/show/10019805) thanks!
10/26/25, 6:53 AM
Really great story. Just fantastic. I hope there's more to come!

10/26/25, 8:19 AM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Many thanks! What else do you think there is to say?

10/28/25, 4:59 PM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) The post hypnotic suggestions, especially at the ending, were well timed. “This orgasm brought to you by Master Hypnotist Michael Martinez!” and "bald pussy" are funny and plausible for an adult hypnosis show. Perhaps the hypnotist could have slipped other items in, like his subjects' permanent respect and submission to him afterward. A common thing would be marketing. The subjects would follow all of the hypnotist's social media and attend future shows and personally promote the show to 20 people while obedience taking another form as they attend and volunteer for every additional show.
10/28/25, 4:55 PM
We need the next chapter ASAP. This is such a hot story. I love a good incest role play that turns real.
10/28/25, 4:49 PM
Extremely hot!! Your writing never disappoints! I look forward to reading this series and seeing what happens to Jake.
10/27/25, 6:13 PM
I came 3 - count ‘em, three - times while reading this. Good job! Would be interesting to see what goes down in the club show… or another private show…

10/28/25, 12:45 AM
@[el mexicano 4091](/user/show/2202935) Yeah, I wouldn't mind seeing either! The problem always is that the narrative's kind of resolved. Perhaps you can "convince me" to keep it going ;)

10/28/25, 4:48 PM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) You could easily have a second show or relive the first show from the hypnotist's perspective and others. You can have the hypnotist give the “special commands” to the sexy participants, disguised from the audience's awareness.
10/28/25, 3:35 PM
Soooo hot!! Love the mindfucking
10/28/25, 2:36 PM
Oh my god this was so hot and so fun. This is one of your best works yet, in quality, characters, tightness… and, of course, your hot af himbos never disappoint. It’s always fun to get to identify with the POV of a nerd who gets the hot guy. I had a blast.