Recent Comments

9/9/25, 6:33 PM
It’s great, writing wise a little rough around the edges, but nothing that took away from the story, love this so far and eager to read more.
9/9/25, 6:04 PM
Very hot! Great worldbuilding and character development to go with a super horny sex scene. I really could learn more about every aspect of this world, from the Dark Lord to the magic to the mystical beasts. In terms of ideas: Personally, I'm a fan of turnabout stories, so I wouldn't mind if the werewolf turned out to be a noble beast that rescued his 'mate' from Kaz's clutches so that Garrett spent the rest of his days as a happy werewolf cumdump for the pack. And then maybe the overconfident Kaz falls 'victim' as well. The wolfpack overcomes Kaz's protection and turns him, and the young warlock learns to enjoy being a werewolf pup being cherished by his Papa Wolf far more than he enjoyed his father's distant attention.
9/9/25, 5:39 PM
Great story!
9/8/25, 5:00 PM
Thank you for the unexpected continuation of this wonderful story) I look forward to the adventures of the new main character and the revelation of secrets! I hope there will be more sex, hypnosis and eroticism along with the plot. It's funny to read when the characters try the 4th wall and it will be interesting to see where this will lead. But it seems to me that although Al Firoz can win, he will lose because of his arrogance, since many have read the story and they will know how he acts! So there will be no surprise effect) Honestly, I want to see how you yourself will act in the Whitechapel story since you added yourself) as a character. 👑 Let's expect cliffhangers in the story)

9/9/25, 5:29 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thank you for your support. I got a recent comment on part 4 of the series which was a pretty direct challenge to pick things up and continue. It was an interesting process drafting this chapter and finding a way to breathe new life into a story and I had to read all the preceeding chapters carefully to ensure an unbroken logical train of events. I was hugely assisted by the original format being a story _within_ a story, and now it has become a story _about_ a story, so of course I have become fair game for the villainous Doctor. I have a generous nature and intend to give everyone, all the characters and the readers what they want. Two further instalments are (currently) planned to complete the series once and for all
Anonymous
9/9/25, 4:06 PM
Loved this!!!
9/7/25, 4:14 PM
damn hot! nothing like an age progression / masculiznation story to start my day. I hope this continues, great work

9/9/25, 3:28 PM
@[cigar_muscle](/user/show/17400) I always forget how much I love writing them so I hope I have more coming too haha! Thanks for checking it out!
9/7/25, 5:27 PM
Kind of reminds me of a wonderful movie Mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium.... I like this one more

9/9/25, 3:27 PM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) Thanks haha! I really tried to hone in on that cluttered whimsical vibe where anything could happen- glad to hear it worked!
9/9/25, 10:22 AM
I agree with BlindSeer0's comment wholeheartedly. What I will say though is that reading this story kinda feels like being edged. What I mean by that is that the writing is so good at keeping me intrigued about what's gonna happen, that I'm like getting hyped for future story beats that might not even happen. At the same time, the erotica part has taken a back seat to the story, which is fine of course, but it definitely leaves me wanting more 🤭 I can definitely relate to Ollie, wanting to squish some big ol' pecs
KG
9/9/25, 8:04 AM
Hot story Jerking my cock in my panties while I’m reading this
Anonymous
9/9/25, 7:32 AM
What a hot story. Read it then re read it again while stroking my cock