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Oct 5, 2015
MalSkin
10/6/15, 11:38 AM
Great story thanks for posting it - love transformation stories turning guys into what they despise. (Shot my load while reading it) I have one similar to that on my tumblr blog. I hope we can read more stories like this from you. Again thanks for taking the time to write it.
Oct 5, 2015
Anonymous
10/6/15, 10:24 AM
Interesting. Could have used proofreading and empty lines after paragraphs. Two serious suspension of disbelief issues: The smart wealthy Adonis spends his time working in a clothes store? The guru of brainwashing spends his time being a chav? Neither is story-breaking, but they could have used a few lines of explanation.
Oct 5, 2015
Anonymous
10/6/15, 7:10 AM
"He had become the thing he despised more than anything." Me, too.
Nov 27, 2014
Anonymous
10/6/15, 2:54 AM
Would love to find this store
Anonymous
10/5/15, 4:03 PM
i cant wait for chapter 3
Cliff
10/5/15, 3:09 PM
I‘m wordless...never predict an ending like this. Poor Dare. Not my taste, but it is believable. Well done!
Anonymous
10/4/15, 9:24 PM
Wonderfully written story, but after all the build up, I don't believe for a second in Kyle's conversion. You make him too sympathetic, eliciting our empathy which conversely makes Cade seem like a horrible person at all times. All the tattooing, piercing, and sex acts should be hot - and they're not, they seem more like torture because they're told from Kyle's point of view. Some people are just not into fetishism and Kyle seems to be the exemplar of that. Making him change his mind at the end seems very hollow and forced. (That's the main issue; I'm one of those who find smoking repulsive in every way.)
Anonymous
10/4/15, 6:54 PM
God I want more of this
Mar 19, 2013
Anonymous
10/4/15, 4:24 AM
Oh my! Awesome story! More please!
Anonymous
10/3/15, 8:10 PM
loved the story....
Rick
10/3/15, 7:22 PM
I thought you were going to have them drain Neils cock before going to bed. Or one rimming Neil and the other taking Neils cock until it explodes. And while all this is going on having their sub conious start admire ring men only. Getting turned on by men's boots, butts and crotchesas a normal way of life. So at some point reverting them back but as a gay family of cock suckers, feet sniffers, and all turned on by their roommate Neil.
Anonymous
10/3/15, 9:30 AM
This was awesome :) do you think you'll write more? I hope so!
Anonymous
10/3/15, 7:23 AM
Damned hot. I'm in SG and this is one of my fantasies.
Anonymous
10/3/15, 12:58 AM
Great concept, I love ethnic stuff. But next time go further with it :P
Anonymous
10/2/15, 5:23 PM
that was a waste of my time reading it please no more trivia
Anonymous
10/2/15, 6:08 AM
Oh no!!! This has just got to be continued!! Super hot!
The guy who made this shit
10/2/15, 4:17 AM
And regarding the comment About the stereotypes well I happen to know some aussies, and I'm aware they aren't all "illiterate bushman" . And I happen to wear a hawaiian shirt to all funerals
Anonymous
10/2/15, 4:14 AM
Has anyone really been far as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
The guy who made this shit
10/2/15, 4:12 AM
Thanks for the Feedback. Honestly don't think I'll redo this ,but You folks are all welcome to. With any changes or modifications you want I didn't really intend this as a Solid fantasy. more so a premis. That I haven't seen much of I hope this inspires some of the better Writers, to make more fantasys with a similar premise. (of guys go someplace end up going native as one of you said)
Anonymous
10/2/15, 2:56 AM
LOL! I love Xorvax's cockiness. :)
Anonymous
10/2/15, 1:48 AM
Awesome!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 9:20 PM
The clue is in the title: a bogan is an unsophisticated / redneck Australian. You may as well complain about a hillbilly being stereotyped
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:52 PM
Not offended, but if I would want to be, I'd find the American guy a horrible 'ugly American' stereotype. Then again, this sets the reader up with glee and anticipation at his fate.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:29 PM
Poor grammar. Too many stereotypes. It looks like you had a harder time learning the English language than you did finding out about Aussies. Us Aussies aren't all illiterate bushmen and blokes you know.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 5:15 PM
Hope we see an update to this soon!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:45 PM
Wow!!!!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:40 PM
This is pretty awesome. I like the sons dominance of the father and how its growing. The subliminal tapes are pretty cool and interesting. Our main guy, the son, could clearly get a harem if he wanted to. Hehe
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:57 PM
This could have been good. As it was, it is in serious need of proofreading. Writing on a phone is as much an excuse for lack of effort as the closet door being closed is excuse for wearing a Hawaiian shirt to a funeral.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:54 PM
Meh...
Mar 12, 2015
Rick
10/1/15, 7:17 AM
Where's part 2. I wish the stories were real sometimes and there was mp3files like the one in the story