Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/31/15, 3:31 AM
I wonder if you put this together as a kindle book if you could sell it on Amazon? I don't think it would it be too X rated, Wonderful sexy story! Well written and very well thought out! Thanks for the ride! This story made me cum many times!!!
Cliff
10/31/15, 3:08 AM
Big thanks to the author for completing a wonderful series! Although there are some loose ends, and I prefer a happy ever after ending for everyone, maybe it's more reasonable now. Love can CHANGE the world, but sometimes it's just not the right thing to do, isn't it?
Anonymous
10/31/15, 2:36 AM
Corrupt his father, I'm confident you will find a way. Just stay out of scat, fisting, and crossdressing for me.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 1:18 AM
I'm glad you continued the story! I didn't enjoy this part as much, the reverend is my least favorite character -- just doesn't turn me on when he does things with Brody. But I'm looking forward to the next installment!
MonsterMash62
10/30/15, 4:54 PM
I love this story. Especially the parts with Kevin.
MonsterMash62
10/30/15, 4:46 PM
This was one hot story. The switch over is nice and slow, from both perspectives. Adding in the other guy becoming a Butler towards the end was also a really nice addition.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 1:58 PM
The father needs to fuck the son - unknowingly. Dress Brody up in a wig and have Coach egg on the drunk dad to fuck "her" up the ass to prevent pregnancy.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 11:48 AM
SOOOO good. Post more! We're a generous, forgiving audience who'd rather be turned on than wait for perfection!
Cliff
10/30/15, 11:45 AM
Like the story, although it's a bit of confused about nowadays and past, but definitely a well-written rare story type.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 6:56 AM
This is just sooooo awesome!
TimNJ
10/30/15, 4:34 AM
Oh yes, the father needs to be totally corrupted!
scudder
10/30/15, 3:25 AM
You've got in these 4 chapters a very interesting story, potentially a lot of sexy fun, with some unique twists. However, in several places it's really hard to follow either as erotica and especially if it's stroke fic. I suspect you've been influenced by "American Horror Story" and the Brannagh movie "Dead Again"! I hope you'll go back, edit it and decide what you want it to be, but I'm very happy you did post a complete story.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 12:12 AM
Would be really good to see Brody's father fall under the effect of the drugs and becoming the coach's pet.
Kk
10/29/15, 7:26 PM
Yes a happy ending. We get so few of those. Thank you for this and I hope to hear more from you
Anonymous
10/29/15, 2:32 PM
Glad you wrote a new chapter - wonderful!
JD
10/29/15, 3:30 AM
Welcome back! I didn't even read it yet, getting to that, but I want to thank u for continuing the story.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 9:55 PM
Great muscle descriptions! Story/narrative gets a bit jumbled at the end, since you are trying to resolve the original "2 guys from Boston" story along with Dr. Hart and his muscle boy club and then Damien and his demons....lot of plot threads here. Maybe some editing to sort things into distinct story lines would help. It is becoming a bit "stream of consciousness" and confusing to follow at the end.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 9:18 PM
Well written and the flashback was well executed. However, wasn't he interrupting the narrator? Was the narrator going to tell him that he made him break up with his girl friend -- or did that just "happen"? Intriguing.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 3:26 PM
Please write more of these. It seems like a wonderful series. All of the things I find most arousing in one story!
Anonymous
10/27/15, 3:24 PM
Excellent go at a story! I appreciate the fantasy and execution of it. More description in the climax(pun intended) would have made this even stronger. Can't wait to see your continued entries.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 11:48 AM
Love the continuation of this series. I can't wait to read more
rubberay4
10/27/15, 11:08 AM
love this story...the women help how much the men are being changed...very hot
Oct 7, 2015
Viridian
10/27/15, 5:49 AM
Good story. I especially liked the buildup where all possibility of sympathy for Jeremy is neatly stripped away. Also, Kirkman's attitude: "Not really." Are you planning to continue with this?
Viridian
10/27/15, 5:43 AM
I liked it. Written well enough and the fantasy was fun. It could have used some more description about events, expressions, the victim's confusion and especially about the thoughts of the narrator. I hope you continue writing here.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 4:42 AM
Thanks for all your good work Mesi. It's a fun read and seems to get dirtier ^_^ I appreciate your taste in men too :D
Mesi
10/27/15, 3:49 AM
Funny someone mentioned being a 6 parter. When I started writing this chapter, it was intended to be the finale. It was only half way through I changed it as I realized if I wanted to end it properly without being rushed I needed to drag the story out more than what I was comfortable in a single chapter. Basically, the aside at Geoffery/Greg's house was running long and I don't like trimming out good things ;) So at the moment, the length of the series is indeterminate. But at least 1 more chapter is coming, that's for sure.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 3:41 AM
Awesome for your first try at a story. I can't wait to read more from you
Anonymous
10/27/15, 3:06 AM
I'm not a misogynist, but having women in a story on this site is way to guarantee turning readers off.
Aug 5, 2014
kurama
10/26/15, 10:29 PM
Way to top from the bottom. Great story
Oct 7, 2015
kurama
10/26/15, 10:08 PM
Great start to this story , I'd love to see/read more on what happens to Jeremy and Kirkmans plans. Really hope for another chapter