Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/20/15, 7:12 PM
I like JJ and Alex together. Just saying. I do feel bad for Jake though. Interested why Alex who started straight seems to be gay now though.
EdIam
12/20/15, 6:43 PM
Hey everyone! Thanks for the feedback and the quick responses! To address some of the questions: I might finally go back and finish I Love Him, But...I always planned on doing one more chapter but kind of lost interest. Now that I'm so into this story, however, it wouldn't happen until I finish this one up. The bullying may be too extreme for some, I just write when I find to be hot. This one may seem particularly mean spirited, but from my perspective, the always upstanding JJ becoming so horrible at Alex's whim is really hot to me. I also found it sexy that, ultimately, due to the circumstances, Jake crossed the incest line without the need to be tized...and JJ loving forcing his brother to do it because of his need to please Alex. Sorry if it's too much, but, in the end, I'm gonna write what gets me going. Won't always be for everyone, kind of the nature of writing. I've heard from several different people and nearly everyone has cited different scenes in different chapters as their personal favorite. Hopefully someone will find something here to be right up their alley. I want to explore many different avenues with my writing so everyone gets their box checked now and again. I will say, however, the next chapter will feature much more Re-Educator use. As always, I'll try to focus more on the rationalization in the minds of the victims. That seems to be the most universal 'sexy thing' in these kinds of stories. Thanks, everyone, for your passion for my story!! I know that even if this wasn't your favorite chapter, hopefully you'll like something down the road a lot more :D. Feel free to message me at ed.edwards105@gmail.com!! You guys rock!
Anonymous
12/20/15, 6:08 PM
Edlam first I want to say you are a great writer and I am a big fan. But I think we may have pushed you too hard to deliver something quick. To be honest this chapter was just meh for me. I have no problem with the bullying or incest but it's true that this comes off feeling a bit sad. Why are you not having the re-educator being used constantly. The whole premise of this story is based on it and it's almost completely forgotten about in this chapter. Also who cares about that blow job if he wasn't mind controlled to do it. I could read a story about a whiny fag giving a blow job to his brother anywhere it's pretty common. This chapter just seems to go nowhere. Please understand that I really love your work and I'm only giving my humble opinion but this chapter was boring and not sexy and I know you are capable of so much better. Once again I really am a big fan and hope you can appreciate the constructive feedback.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 5:41 PM
I dont mind the incest (and if you add the father, thats awesome) but... all the bully stuff its just too much for me, its really sad...
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:38 PM
The parental cruelty reactions are too well-written to be hot. :(
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:29 PM
Totally agree with the comment below. You're the one who must continue "remote control daddy" It has a lot of potential
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:27 PM
But I think it should be better with the dad as well. We have seen the play of jj and jake too long! We need the father and Eric!!!
Steve10185
12/20/15, 4:15 PM
Please, please stay away from going further on the incest stuff in future chapters. I am really hoping the parents aren't involved in this sexually, it's the fastest way to lose an otherwise great hardon you're giving me! :) So many more avenues to take this without incest.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/20/15, 4:05 PM
Was good to see Jake's throat get raped -- with Jake so wiling to do the raping himself. Jake will find his salvation (pun intended) when he accepts what so many of us learn to accept -- what filthy little queers we are when faced with a Superior Man.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 3:00 PM
Would love to see Jake turn the tables on Alex. And take control of Alex