Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/3/15, 7:09 AM
Hot!
The guardsman
11/2/15, 7:03 AM
This is just a fill in but has to be there so that people understand what's happening. I'm always open for suggestions
Anonymous
11/2/15, 4:17 AM
Interesting, hope to read more from you
Anonymous
11/2/15, 2:29 AM
That was pretty hot. I'd love to see him change more!
Anonymous
11/1/15, 9:56 PM
Coach should recommend the father give Brody a regular prostate massage (with a vibrator?). This will stop Brody getting erections in training and he'll feel much happier and relaxed!
Anonymous
11/1/15, 9:17 PM
Dull and repetitive. No character development.
Nov 1, 2015
Anonymous
11/1/15, 8:57 PM
I'm not sure about this story... The main character was raped, wasn't he? Will there be a sequel?
Nov 1, 2015
Anonymous
11/1/15, 6:40 PM
Incredible story! Very well written and very hot!
Nov 1, 2015
MonsterMash62
11/1/15, 6:25 PM
Wow! Very hot story. I loved the twist.
Nov 1, 2015
TimNJ
11/1/15, 5:20 PM
Frigging hot, I hope there's a sequel making him a fat pig of a Dad from all of his special ice cream cones.
Anonymous
11/1/15, 8:38 AM
So glad my favorite writer came home again with his latest work! Brilliant and Exciting as always. I have to agree that it may be a little distracting if Zaid and his father are still aware of their hypnosis, but still arousing when seeing new characters as slaves! I am really looking forward to seeing the next chapter! Possibly we will see another 2 more characters as well then? Like former chapters, will those sexy 4-4 spaghetti sucking toe plots appear again. Let's see! I have prepared my popcorn!
Anonymous
11/1/15, 7:05 AM
This is hot
Cliff
11/1/15, 6:38 AM
Can‘t wait to see the true fun begin!
Anonymous
11/1/15, 6:36 AM
I just hope you dont leave them aware of his control the entire time.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 5:41 PM
Perfect Halloween story with a great ending.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 3:47 PM
Nice. Had always wanted to see a continuation of this story. Would like to see how Neil would take control of the well do family next door... Can't wait to read more.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 2:53 PM
Another excellent chapter! Good to see you back.
Jan 20, 2007
Anonymous
10/31/15, 2:35 PM
I wish this was real. I would love to be turned into a nasty kinky piggy submissive smooth twinky sissy faggot Shemale bimbo cumdump slutty bitch. I would want my Dick to shrink to 2 inches, my ass to inflate to large it is 20 inches from my back, and breasts so freakishly gargantuan they would be sized JJJ looking like beachballs. I would be so dumb, that within 1 week I would be getting fist/punch fucked in my pussy, a hardcore drug addict on the street whoring my body for 20 bucks to any man for anything. Eventually a dominant sadistic aggressive hyper masculine man would force me into sexual slavery stretching my worn out pussy into a wrecked gaping saggy count.
MonsterMash62
10/31/15, 11:20 AM
Wow. Great ending to a great story. Everything pretty much wrapped up, but more than enough threads left for a sequel.
TimNJ
10/31/15, 11:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Well-written with real suspense!
Anonymous
10/31/15, 10:46 AM
Corrupt the father. Love this story can't wait to the next one.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 3:56 AM
Can't wait for more
DEF
10/31/15, 3:52 AM
Such a wonderful and unusual story. Not at all what I thought it would be at the beginning. And a HAPPY ENDING!!! So wonderful. Hope you write more. Thanks.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 3:31 AM
I wonder if you put this together as a kindle book if you could sell it on Amazon? I don't think it would it be too X rated, Wonderful sexy story! Well written and very well thought out! Thanks for the ride! This story made me cum many times!!!
Cliff
10/31/15, 3:08 AM
Big thanks to the author for completing a wonderful series! Although there are some loose ends, and I prefer a happy ever after ending for everyone, maybe it's more reasonable now. Love can CHANGE the world, but sometimes it's just not the right thing to do, isn't it?
Anonymous
10/31/15, 2:36 AM
Corrupt his father, I'm confident you will find a way. Just stay out of scat, fisting, and crossdressing for me.
Anonymous
10/31/15, 1:18 AM
I'm glad you continued the story! I didn't enjoy this part as much, the reverend is my least favorite character -- just doesn't turn me on when he does things with Brody. But I'm looking forward to the next installment!
MonsterMash62
10/30/15, 4:54 PM
I love this story. Especially the parts with Kevin.
MonsterMash62
10/30/15, 4:46 PM
This was one hot story. The switch over is nice and slow, from both perspectives. Adding in the other guy becoming a Butler towards the end was also a really nice addition.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 1:58 PM
The father needs to fuck the son - unknowingly. Dress Brody up in a wig and have Coach egg on the drunk dad to fuck "her" up the ass to prevent pregnancy.