Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/21/15, 4:33 AM
I really hope Alex is getting his comeuppance soon. This is just getting really sick
Anonymous
12/21/15, 4:17 AM
To be honest, I'm just waiting for Jake to return to his friend, who will tell him the Re-Educator and help him to remember all this, hate Alex and turn the tables one and for all. Btw, You are planning to continue "I Love Him, But..."? Awesome! I love that story <3
Anonymous
12/21/15, 3:16 AM
I'll agree with other posters and point out it's almost never the sex that's interesting; it's the psychological and emotional context and the buildup toward it (that's one reason why some of the stories on this site that have barely any sex in them are among the hottest). Prolonging the sex without it leading anywhere—without direction—is just aimless and boring. The story's set up and denouement is really what gets us - the sex is never the main thing but just an enhancement. What's so appealing about most of these stories is that they're wish fulfillment for many of us. I think only the sickest among us would really want to be like Alex in real life. Frankly, I hope Jake gets back the machine and is halfway thru transforming Alex when he accidentally falls or drops the Re-Educator, rendering Alex a vegetable for the rest of his life (or maybe Alex should spend the rest of his life being a fucktoy for AIDS victims).
Anonymous
12/21/15, 3:02 AM
A lo mejor en la parte 2, hipnotizan al padre para que el amigo también se divierta :D
Anonymous
12/21/15, 2:43 AM
God, this is hot. More, please!!
Anonymous
12/21/15, 1:21 AM
Totally respect the decision to write for your own dick. I think something a little less heart-wrenching might sit better with most readers, but you've gotta do you--everyone gets off to different strokes!
Anonymous
12/21/15, 1:07 AM
Después de leer tantas historias en inglés, leer este tipo de historias en español se siente raro, pero no deja de ser una buena historia. ¡Espero la continúes!
A BIG BULLY LOVER
12/21/15, 12:58 AM
I'll continue to read this story, in the hopes that it returns to the themes of the first three chapters. Chapter four was a little weaker then the previous first three & this one is weaker still. What made the earlier ones exciting was not the sex scenes [ hell, every story has plenty of sex] but the exposition , the character development. As each new chapter has been filled with more sex than the previous one's they've lost sight of character development...As a Bully-Lover [ in fantasy/fiction, only], I was falling into love with J.J. , but he wasn't further developed,,,what a let-down !
Anonymous
12/21/15, 12:30 AM
CUT OUT ALL THAT INVISIBILITY SHIT, IT'S STUPID....LEAVE IT TO LESSER WRITERS !
Anonymous
12/21/15, 12:26 AM
Of course all the stories are 'fiction' & the authors can always write whatever they want, That's not the point...Our comments, are just that: comments to 'aid' the writer if their interested in what has 'turned-on' or been previously enjoyed by the reader. Myself, I prefer the mind-control & hypnosis stories, where a character totally changes the behavior of the other character[s] WITHOUT using any MAGIC...It's just to easy & fancyfull to just rub an amulet or magic rock, etc & have the person become completely different. What made this story more interesting was when we delved into their minds and saw how they rationalized their new behavior, becoming basic'ly a new version of their old self...I think the author really had it going in the earlier chapters with the beginning of JJ's 'transformation', but lost track of this & didn't go far enough in re-developing his 'new' complete Bully persona 100%. Alex also should have 'played-around' more with Jakes self perception. It seems like the author is rushing to bring in the Mother, Father & Girlfriend without having finished with completely redeveloping the three characters he already has on the scene!