Recent Comments

EdIam
12/11/15, 2:35 PM
Might be a bit of a wait for Chapter 5, everyone. Final exam today, some fun with friends, and off to Chicago for vacation tomorrow. May have some downtime this evening to work on it, but I didn't want to leave you all without the first major sex scene! Hope to get the next one out soon!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 2:32 PM
Whoever posted the comment before me is right,I want eric to swoop in and save the say and give alex a taste of his own medicine
Mar 13, 2014
kerbear
12/11/15, 11:55 AM
The story has great possibilities and yes there are some mistakes but they can be fixed. Please keep working on it.
Johan
12/11/15, 8:47 AM
Agree 100% with the previous speaker!! Chapter 4, where are you??? :D :D :D
Anonymous
12/11/15, 8:02 AM
This story is fantastic so far!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 7:18 AM
Just feels a bit hollow, a lot of points and reasons are missing
Anonymous
12/11/15, 6:02 AM
Every second we wait for a new chapter is cruel and unusual punishment far worse then Alex's schemes ;)
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/11/15, 5:50 AM
Love the control! Love the humiliation!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/10/15, 11:49 PM
Damn, this just gets better. "my good little boys" I love being a good little boy in a trance!
Cliff
12/10/15, 10:40 PM
The setting is good, sex is hot, but I wonder why Steve planed all of these. A char with soul and reasons would be more interesting.
Anonymous
12/10/15, 8:08 PM
excellent to see a regression story on here again...it has been way too long.
West
12/10/15, 7:57 PM
To be honest I would like every one to be back to normal and Alex to pay...but that is just my thinking. ...good work
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:47 PM
God I wish there were more
littletinytim20@gmail.com
12/10/15, 6:12 PM
Since Jake, J.J. & Alex are all 'proud' to be gay, it would be really 'hot' in a future chapter to make the boy's father an 'old school' in the closet non-proud gay man as a contrast, If he was totally in the closet he could become [with the re-educator] almost a characture of hyper super-macho behavior at it's worst,[ but in the context of this story, it's sexy macho best...] He could lust over J.J. & Alex, become even more of a cruel bully toward Jake. He could be mean, every other word out of his mouth a cuss word, a mean drunk, perhaps turned into a leather clad bicker daddy [?], a 24 hour a day cigar smoker...just an all around ass-hole ! I don't agree with 'boonboon', Alex is no criminal, the story is fiction & he allows us to see the most sexy debased J.O. ideas,,,though it wouldn't be a bad idea to turn the law abiding dad into some sort of real criminal as long as he becomes a super sexy bully to both his son's!!! Please save the 'lessons' till the very end [lets hope there's many chapters to go, since you can always have other characters come by the house whom Alex would have to re educate.....For example if the dad & j'j' were turned into criminals by Alex, it wouldn't be long before a Police Man would arrive [ & you know how we all love mind control & transformation stories concerning cop's, etc...] WHATEVER YOU WRITE, JUST KEEP UP THE GOOD WORD & PLEASE DON'T MAKE YOUR READERS WAIT TOO LONG...THANKS AGAIN
May 10, 2009
alx62
12/10/15, 4:24 PM
look forward to the other GEMS
meen
12/10/15, 3:33 PM
oh story is hot
Dec 9, 2015
Anonymous
12/10/15, 12:57 PM
Toby definitely be mind controlled by the computer :)
Anonymous
12/10/15, 12:50 PM
Wait!
Cliff
12/10/15, 12:47 PM
As I'm not too into humiliation, I hope there still will be a happy ending ! But when Alex is controlling everything, has all the power, it seems hard to turnabout and end in a good way. This sociopath really needs to get some lessons!
May 1, 2009
alx62
12/10/15, 12:11 PM
excellent story why only for rich people though assome of us poorer people would love it to happen to us
Dec 9, 2015
Anonymous
12/10/15, 11:11 AM
I get the feeling he is signing his life, and mind, away ... :0)
BoonBoon
12/10/15, 7:34 AM
I've been waiting the whole day for this! thank you! My, my, Alex is not a bully. He's a fucking criminal! Do you plan to make some changes in the clothing of the mind fucked brother? would be great to see that! maybe turn JJ into a leathered biker or a punk with spiked hair, and Jake an extreme nerd cliche? that would be hot! Can't wait for more!!!! Enjoy your vacations and good luck with your finals. I'll be waiting anxiously.
EdIam
12/10/15, 7:21 AM
Sure, you guys can contact me at ed.edwards105@gmail.com
Dec 9, 2015
Anonymous
12/10/15, 7:09 AM
Hot story but wheres the MC?
Max
12/10/15, 6:52 AM
Hi, Viridian. Can you please recommend more stories with fairly vile protagonists? I don't like stories with the protagonist as the slave (except Edlam's this one). I want a story with the protagonist getting the power and start to build his harem! Probably like Mafisto's 'The office part' and 'the berries.' Do you know anything similar to his works!!!! Many thanks!!!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:49 AM
It's glad that we won't see those women anymore! Haha.
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:44 AM
Well... I will keep reading your novels during your vacation... a good author needs a good vacation... so good luck!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:38 AM
Edlam do you have an email that people could contact you at?
EdIam
12/10/15, 6:37 AM
Hey guys! Just a quick update. I'd say I'm nearly finished with Chapter 4 and already know where I'm going with the next few chapters. Problem is, I have finals tomorrow and Friday and then I go on vacation to Chicago for the next week. I'll probably have some downtime during the vacation to really focus on the story but no promises. Hopefully all of you keep your interest as the steadiness of chapters will decline slightly for a little while!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:35 AM
So good but such s tease! Continue continue continue!!!!!!!!!!