Recent Comments

Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 4:01 AM
Thank you Edlam, I never thought I'd get a personal response from the author...Wow Your really on my wave-length, I love stories where people are transformed into the exact opposite of what they were, [& always for the 'sexy-worst' !!!] You have really got into the mind of these guys & shown us how they tick. It's great how the 'good' brother is changing into a complete bully [& I hope a real ass-hole] It would nice to see thing's from Alex's perspective via the 'new' J.J...These things only work when the macho bully convinces himself that he's right & anyone who doesn't see things his way is FUCKING WRONG !..[he was such a fucking goody two shoe's , there should still be lots to CORRECT, making him the meanest bully we can think of.......
EdIam
12/12/15, 2:53 AM
Thanks, Gary!! I just want to write a story I know I'd like to read. I'm glad to get such an amazing reaction! Working on Chapter 5 now. And, for all that may have missed it, if you want to e-mail me any questions, I'm ed.edwards105@gmail.com You guys are making me feel pretty confident in my writing! Thanks for all the support! Can't wait to get the next chapter out for you all!
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 2:40 AM
Dear Edlam : what a great un-P.C story...We see nothing but anti-bulling stuff in the gay press, but this is total fiction & I for one find it VERY EXCITING to see the world TOTALLY from the point of view of a REAL BULLY & and ONE WHO REALLY CARES NOTHING for those around him ! I agree with the other comment, I practically shot a load over jj's change after his shower..We need a lot more of the NEW JJ & what he's thinking as well as doing. Whatever the 'reader' thinks of his actions, Him & Alex should be on the same wave length,[ both feeling they are always right & everything they do is for their pleasure & fuck what anyone thinks! Of course Alex can change what any thinks or disapproves of just by using the re-educator to make his behavior & ideas, theirs!! A real sick bully like Alex wouldn't think twice, figuring he was ALWAYS RIGHT & it was the other folks minds that needed readjustment !SO REMEMBER...KEEP IT UP WE READERS WANT TO SEE MORE & MORE BULLYING IN THIS HOUSEHOLD...I have a feeling that 'poor Jake' is in for a lot more as everyone including himself starts to consider him a 'filthy queer' & treat him as such !!!
bleuboy
12/12/15, 2:39 AM
I don't know if you mind this or not, but I copied the story down and edited it immensely. Would you like to see what I did with it?
EdIam
12/12/15, 2:24 AM
So, what I was trying to say, I think it's hot that Alex really INSTANTLY took what was his with a thoroughly willing JJ...especially considering JJ was a virginal Christian up to the point Alex fucked with his personality. Not only did he not think twice about sucking his cock, he wanted it DESPERATELY. But, on a side note, thanks for the well wishes for finals!! Passed them all with flying colors! Felt amazing! Thanks for the support, everyone! Off to Chicago for some much needed rest/relaxation/sex!! :D
EdIam
12/12/15, 1:46 AM
I'm so happy my story has caused so much discussion! In my mind (and penis) the idea that Alex could so quickly and effectively change JJ's sexual expression, needs, and desires is a huge part of the story. I think for Alex, who I've expressed to have already been promiscuous prior to his re-educated gayness, it makes sense to finally have some kind of sex with his fully controlled thrall. He'd contained it for as long as could but needed to let out. He may not be as generous as time goes on, however.
Anonymous
12/12/15, 12:43 AM
I AGREE WITH BOTH YOU GUY'S. THE HOTTEST PART OF THE CHAPTER & THE STORY AS A WHOLE IS HOW J.J. CHANGED AFTER HIS SHOWER, HIS WHOLE BEHAVIOR CHANGE WAS VERY EXCITING. I CAN SEE WHERE THE MORE OF A BULLY HE BECOMES, THE MORE 'MANLY' HE ACTS & FEELS. I ALSO THOUGHT THE SEX SCENE WAS THE WEAKEST PART, MORE LIKE EVERY OTHER GAY SEX STORY. HOPE WE GET A LOT MORE J.J. & PERHAPS GET INTO SOME 'FETISH' STUFF : TIGHT JEANS, LEATHER, SHOWING-OFF IN & OUT OF TIGHT CLOTHS. LATER-ON IF THE WRITER IS INTO IT, PISS [SCAT ?], ALL THAT HEAVY STUFF......
Anonymous
12/12/15, 12:15 AM
'slavethruhypno' is right on, it's time Alex got back to work on Jake, turning him into the total worthless faggot Alex thought he was anyway, but it's important that the author takes us into Jake's brain, so we can get off on seeing how he processes the changes to real 'fagdom'! Also. he's still a little to smart: wouldn't Alex want to 'dumb him down' a bit? Not make him stupid , but just 'low' average ,more like the way his brother now see's him ? I also really like the Bullying theme's and find them very exciting. The best part of the story has been when J.J. gets out of the shower & thinks about his brother, becoming a 'new man'. I loved the 'new' way he talked and related to Jake. We need a lot more of this. Actually, I thought the weakest part was the heavy sex at the chapters end. Alex should have played a little more 'hard-to-get', which would have caused J.J. to react even more toward Jake to impress Alex [ and remember he's been 'programmed' to become more and more of a bully.]
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/11/15, 11:46 PM
Love that Jake is being shown what a fag he really is. He will soon accept it and sink down to the level he belongs at. It is a good place to be when one accepts the truth about oneself.
Anonymous
12/11/15, 11:44 PM
Hope Eric saves the day, sometime in late 2016 or 2017. In the meantime give us lots of chapters. You still have to re-educate the ex girlfriend to get rid of her once & for all..[isn't she out shopping with the mother ?] A real sociopath like Alex would have a little fun changing her when she returns..probably making her into a total sick nympho before sending on her way and he's going to have his hand's full in dealing with the mother now that her son's are so different from when she left in the morning...Then we come to the Dad. I can't wait to see what the author comes up with for him !
Anonymous
12/11/15, 11:05 PM
Please make jj as much of a sociopath as his mentor Alex, it's very exciting !
Anonymous
12/11/15, 11:03 PM
THIS LAST POST IS 'RIGHT-ON'..THIS IS OBVIOUSLY A BULLY & HUMILIATION STORY & MORE POWER TO THE AUTHOR..[But please don't fall into the trap of so many of these stories: NO SLAVES & MASTERS, PLEASE !! It's enough to call a man 'Sir' as a sign of respect....] LOVE IT WHEN A RE-EDUCATED BULLY LIKE JJ STARTS TO REALLY FEEL HIS 'POWER' & SHOWS IT IN THE WAY HE ACT'S, DRESS'ES MOVES, USES FOUL LANGUAGE & RELATES IN A TOTALLY 'SUPERIOR' MANNER TO OTHERS !
Anonymous
12/11/15, 8:30 PM
Make Eric come to rescue? Well, then where shall the story go? Jake suddenly decides to play Alex?! No way. Pls. I think it will probably be better if Alex has first played happily for a long time with his slaves, be it Jake, Eric, JJ, Dad, policemen, coaches, soldiers, or gangsters. And then it's our turn to expect a twist plot for the end of the story :)
little'tiny'tim20@gmail.com
12/11/15, 7:13 PM
LOVE ALL THE BULLYING OF JAKE BY JJ...MORE PLEASE : CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW JJ TRY'S TO IMPRESS ALEX BY BULLYING JAKE IN FRONT OF HIM & LOVE HOW YOU WRITE ABOUT JJ'S NEW 'FEELING'S'...ONLY WISH ALEX WOULD USE THE RE EDUCATOR TO GIVE JAKE BACK HIS FORMER [RE EDUCATED] FEELINGS FOR ALEX AS WELL & RE EDUCATE HIM TO BELIEVE HE DESERVES TO BE TREATED IN THIS MANNER & START ACTING LIKE THE 'FILTHY QUEER',WIMP,ETC. HIS BROTHER & ALEX ARE CALLING HIM !...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..MORE BULLYING !!!!
JamieTi684
12/11/15, 6:53 PM
Hope Eric saves the day too. Good luck with finals Edlam, we're all rooting for you!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 6:13 PM
I would love for Eric to come in and rescue Jake from Alex and set things right.
Anonymous
12/11/15, 5:36 PM
Agreed best friend needs to make everything right, but I am liking the plot, I didn't think I would, kinda made me sad, but now it's hot. Good luck with finals
EdIam
12/11/15, 2:35 PM
Might be a bit of a wait for Chapter 5, everyone. Final exam today, some fun with friends, and off to Chicago for vacation tomorrow. May have some downtime this evening to work on it, but I didn't want to leave you all without the first major sex scene! Hope to get the next one out soon!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 2:32 PM
Whoever posted the comment before me is right,I want eric to swoop in and save the say and give alex a taste of his own medicine
Mar 13, 2014
kerbear
12/11/15, 11:55 AM
The story has great possibilities and yes there are some mistakes but they can be fixed. Please keep working on it.
Johan
12/11/15, 8:47 AM
Agree 100% with the previous speaker!! Chapter 4, where are you??? :D :D :D
Anonymous
12/11/15, 8:02 AM
This story is fantastic so far!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 7:18 AM
Just feels a bit hollow, a lot of points and reasons are missing
Anonymous
12/11/15, 6:02 AM
Every second we wait for a new chapter is cruel and unusual punishment far worse then Alex's schemes ;)
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/11/15, 5:50 AM
Love the control! Love the humiliation!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/10/15, 11:49 PM
Damn, this just gets better. "my good little boys" I love being a good little boy in a trance!
Cliff
12/10/15, 10:40 PM
The setting is good, sex is hot, but I wonder why Steve planed all of these. A char with soul and reasons would be more interesting.
Anonymous
12/10/15, 8:08 PM
excellent to see a regression story on here again...it has been way too long.
West
12/10/15, 7:57 PM
To be honest I would like every one to be back to normal and Alex to pay...but that is just my thinking. ...good work
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:47 PM
God I wish there were more