Recent Comments

BoonBoon
1/12/16, 6:29 PM
Hi! I'm intrigued, this sounds promising. Your style is very austere and I respect that, but if you allow me a suggestion, it could improve a lot adding more descriptions of how men look, or what they are wearing when they're not naked. Since Grant works in a farm, would be hot if you describe him wearing some sluty cowboy clothing, beside going naked all the time (daisy dukes, thong, tight shirt, hat and some hot boots, maybe). Would be good to know more about the master too. Who is he, his age, and how he looks like. Is he ugly? handsome? is he a nerd looking for revenge? He just want to fuck every man in town, or he wants to ridicule them too? Calling him "master" all the time would be repetitive, sounds very simple and boring to me. You could alternate with "Sir", "Mayor" or "Boss", for avoid the simple use of "Yes, Master" that is overused on mind control stories.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 8:51 AM
This was taken from a Tumblr post
Kyle
1/12/16, 8:40 AM
Another excellent tale. And with a great message as well. Perfect writing, as always.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 8:28 AM
The Home Page contains links (About Page, News) that allow messages to be sent to the site moderator. Authors cherish comments, and finding one addressed to someone else tacked onto your story is disheartening. If you're reading the stories using a computer with Windows, you can change the apparent type size by simultaneously holding down the "cntl" key and moving the wheel on the mouse. Turning the wheel forward enlarges the type; moving it back decreases the type size. The text will adjust the line breaks automatically to accommodate the change in type size.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 6:46 AM
you can put a napkin on someone's mouth but you cannot force him to swallow
Anonymous
1/12/16, 12:33 AM
Where did the first two ranch hands come from? And why didn't Mark wake the boys up while they were sucking on each other just for a reaction. He could have said horse slave and they would be back to ranch hands.
Anonymous
1/11/16, 10:38 PM
STILL WAITING FOR CHAPTER 7 : I THINK THE RE EDUCATOR WAS THE SINGLE 'HOTTEST STORY' OF THE YEAR [2015] ON THIS SITE...BUT EDLAM IS A BIT OF A TEASE, IN TAKING SO LONG TO PRODUCE FUTURE CHAPTERS...EVEN TAKING INTO CONSIDERATION THAT HE HAS A 'FULL-PLATE', BEING A STUDENT, HOLDING DOWN A JOB & JUST WRITING AS [AT LEAST FOR NOW], A SIDE LINE...WE, HIS DEVOTED FAN'S, NEED [NO, CRAVE] MORE : PLEASE 'EDLAM' DON'T LET US DOWN !
Anonymous
1/11/16, 10:28 PM
WOULD PREFER A SLIGHTLY BIGGER FONT, TO MAKE READING EASIER ON THE EYE'S : THANK'S FOR CONSIDERING THIS 'REQUEST'....
Anonymous
1/11/16, 10:26 PM
Awfully short, ending way too soon....Although not a bad idea, it could have been more developed...
Anonymous
1/11/16, 8:34 PM
Perfect. All men should always be naked and obey the "call". Hope to see more about grant and his new role
Q
1/11/16, 7:49 PM
Please, please, please continue this!!!
Anonymous
1/11/16, 7:17 PM
A hot start! I've always love the idea of men marching naked for erotic purposes. The only complaint I have is the lack of bodily description of the men involved. For example, Grant works at a farm, is he beefy or lean, is he Hsieh or shaven, etc.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/11/16, 7:03 PM
Men will always be naked. Get new instructions every night. As it should be even in real life! Hot!!!!
Anonymous
1/11/16, 4:34 PM
Next chapter?
Anonymous
1/11/16, 1:44 PM
I think the fonts fine. Also good start.
Bankstreet
1/11/16, 1:32 PM
Good beginning to a depiction of a world transformed.
Anonymous
1/11/16, 12:59 PM
Today's new version of the site has much smaller font and is too small to read comfortably on my phone. Hope you can bump it up?
Anonymous
1/11/16, 11:23 AM
Hot story! (And I'm first to comment on the new site. Hurray!)
Robert
1/10/16, 6:29 PM
Muy sacrilego pero muy real y excitante también!!!
Robert
1/10/16, 6:22 PM
Excelente!!!
Robert
1/10/16, 6:17 PM
Me gustó mucho. Enorme inventiva y lamentablemente, harto creíble!
Jul 14, 2010
Robert
1/10/16, 6:11 PM
Me encantó. Muchísima fantasía pero también muchísimo deseo reprimido que se suelta con un pretexto más que pintoresco. Me ha excitado sobremanera! Gracias!!!
Anonymous
1/10/16, 3:40 PM
Great question Johan! :D
Anonymous
1/10/16, 2:41 PM
I'm still jerking off. congratulations, hot story! maybe a second part?
Johan
1/10/16, 11:35 AM
Ch. 7, where are you?? :D
Anonymous
1/10/16, 5:16 AM
ya know. this little story has some very good bones. but it has no flesh yet. youre a good writer. I think you rushed it to print before you really finished it. got me boned up and playing with myself, but i wanted more
Anonymous
1/9/16, 11:36 PM
I really love this chapter. Although i wasmt really into the whole dog act and the dog tail butt plug thing, but hey thats just my preference. I thoroughly enjoyed olivers role in charlie's downfall and its getting me horny that they will eventually take down the rest of the police station. Now that will be very interesting. I cant wait
Anonymous
1/9/16, 6:57 PM
What a great way to extract revenge Kidnap you and your best friend and drug friend Friend turns into a gay slut and you are restrained would love to see each load of cum brings him closer to remaining gay for life thugs feed him first then your load will seal deal all the time you see your fate as friend goes first then friend feeds you your pill
Hyphap
1/9/16, 3:09 PM
Wrestlr is the best(lr). Always a deep (and explosive) pleasure to read his stuff, and this was no exception. Whew.
Anonymous
1/9/16, 6:30 AM
Lost interest