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Anonymous
5/18/16, 11:45 AM
these, not thesis generally really, not gene rally I'm sure, not I 'sure I have iPad auto-correct, which is why I do my editing on a full laptop or desktop as I have quite a bit of experience editing documents both privately and in the office.
Anonymous
5/18/16, 11:40 AM
It would be awesome if someone who can read/write both German and English could translate this. Using Google Translate, I myself can probably re-write it for English-only speakers. The only problems are: 1. It will take me a long time due to the sheer amount of content in these 4 parts, and 2. Google Translate generally only does things literally, which I would then have to interpret as what the author "likely" meant. I' sure some of the story and nuance will be lost if I do so. If the author is able to speak & write English, even if broken, and is willing to help correct some of the glaring gaffs I'm liable to make, I'd be more than happy to give it a shot.
Xmale06
5/18/16, 8:11 AM
Don't tell me it's a one-shot story!!!! You HAVE TO keep it going!!!!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 5:19 AM
Just perfect. Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks alot!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 4:57 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 4:55 AM
The story was hot. But it was so poorly written that it took time to get through the thicket. Writing ends with editing. Having said that -- next chapter, please.
Willie Cici
5/18/16, 4:53 AM
See -- that's what I mean about comments and their helpfulness. I had not even thought of a sequel until I read TimNJ's comment. I'll have to get working on that next installment soon.
Anonymous
5/18/16, 1:15 AM
It did seem rushed but it made me cum so i loved it anyway LOL ;D
Anonymous
5/18/16, 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope you continue it.
5/17/16, 2:14 PM
The story is hot enough, but this would probably have benefited a lot from a rewrite or two. Also, there is no sense of scale or continuity: "Oh, incidentally, it's also a time machine." And this guy works in accounting? That said, I want to see your next story.
Anonymous
5/17/16, 12:10 PM
U gonna beef up his bro's..? 'Coz i kinda like the idea of ONE twink getting ganbanged by more beefy bro's..?
JasCo
5/17/16, 12:07 PM
Cool story. If one of his buddies gets a bit too alpha he could transform him as well and have a second bitch!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 10:26 AM
Very hot. I'm curious to find out what can be fit into his stretched out hole.
Anonymous
5/17/16, 10:19 AM
Nice ... love sissy twink stories ... got me hard almost instantly
Anonymous
5/17/16, 10:07 AM
great story! hope to discover what other inventions are in that mansion!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 10:06 AM
very hot story!
TimNJ
5/17/16, 9:58 AM
Oh this one is really good! I hope this story is explored in further chapters! I want to know who are those strapped-in "guests" and how was the sex!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 9:51 AM
great story!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 7:11 AM
ever consider a part 2
VRL
5/17/16, 7:09 AM
love it
Anonymous
5/17/16, 5:51 AM
Oh, fuck! Man, you're really talented on transformation stories! You've become in one of my favourites writers!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 4:31 AM
Very sexy story! More like this please!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 4:27 AM
sexy--always nice to see a good twink tf :)
Anonymous
5/17/16, 3:52 AM
Hot
D
5/17/16, 3:17 AM
loved it!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 2:11 AM
Would love to see in one of your other stories that when the person changes so does their reality. Like everyone always knew him as the illegal alien turning tricks on south broadway to get by.
Anonymous
5/17/16, 2:08 AM
Loving it would love to see some more changes, maybe the wizard rents out the dildo to the highest bidder so they get to change the guys any way they want. Would like to see the guys change more, differ from each other. Good start.
Anonymous
5/16/16, 7:36 PM
I really need a good tan!
Jim
5/16/16, 6:56 PM
Please, make the new Phil very tacky and vulgar, with some strong ghetto qualities. You could add a lot of that describing details like the clothes he wear, or the music he likes. Furn him into a fucking naco! I suggest some loud music, like "banda" or "corridos", that always have noisy trumpets, trombones and accordions. Also, many of those songs are about getting drunk and how manly the singers supposedly are (but then, there's singers like Gerardo Ortiz that likes to wear skinny golden pants, flamboyant flowered shirts, and plucked eyebrows, so there's some sexual ambiguity and a lot of vulgarity). You can keep your interest making him feel innerly humiliated with his changes, and aware of how ugly he's becoming, but unable to make something to stop the changes. By the way, do you need some help with the words in Spanish? I could help you with that
Anonymous
5/16/16, 6:17 PM
Good story! Hope to see more about