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Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 5:34 PM
I don't, uh, really think 'basic human compassion' is a valid argument on a site that literally has story after story about men being raped through hypnosis. Just saying.
Sep 19, 2016
9/20/16, 5:32 PM
SO happy to see you again, old friend!!! Loved the story. So glad to have you back!
Anonymous
9/20/16, 4:52 PM
Please update the story!!!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 3:10 PM
Someone needs to make the Cult of Cock into a full fledged story
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 2:58 PM
lol if you guys have that much of a morale conscience than maybe you guys shouldnt read stories about altering a guys persception and morals so much that the parents literally gave their son away to a sexual predator next door
Anonymous
9/20/16, 2:39 PM
Really hot story. Wish there were more superhero stories here.
Boston Satyr
9/20/16, 11:40 AM
Very well written. Feminization isn't my cup of tea, but you definitely held my interest. Would be interesting to see Bryan making Jason go through multiple changes - muscle hunk, jock, Twink, bear, all the while none-the-wiser, all based on Bryan's sadistic whims. Sequel!!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 11:29 AM
So sorry that basic human compassion is getting in the way of your sociopathic boner.
Boston Satyr
9/20/16, 11:27 AM
More!! Love this theme. Tony & Brandon were my favorites.
Pedro
9/20/16, 10:20 AM
Muy buena amigo
JamieTi684
9/20/16, 9:27 AM
Amazing story!!!!!
Anonymous
9/20/16, 7:44 AM
When will we get to know what happens next????
Anonymous
9/20/16, 7:34 AM
Make a third part D:!!! My dick needs it <3
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 5:10 AM
Oh ffs people stop making such a big deal about it. Go gripe on an anime lovers forum if you are that upset. Geez almost as bad as the harambe mess.
Willie Cici
9/20/16, 4:07 AM
Thank you JasCo for the comments. The person signing a power of attorney names the person his attorney in fact. So Derek does sigh the document, granting Nick his power of attorney. . As to the leather collar sentence, that's an error that I will correct. Thanks for the reading. I try to cut down on the errors by spending hours on the edits. Sometimes, the editing takes longer than the drafting.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 4:01 AM
More step dad action please!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 3:05 AM
I think you may not have realized that unnecessarily killing a dog makes it very difficult for some readers to take the remainder of your story seriously. Some people are into that kind of emotional manipulation by direct sadism, but many are not.
Dave
9/20/16, 2:20 AM
This is another brilliant story in this wonderful story arc! So many writers here concentrate on the darker side of mind-control and manipulation, but there are occasional authors who explore just what an amazing force for healing something like telepathy or shared awareness could be. Kudos to you, and I'd love to see more!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 2:01 AM
To person two posts up: would you still be laughing at us if the device was tested by. A mom throwing her child in front of a car? A crunch, a squeal of tires, and the infant was no more.
Sep 19, 2016
UchihaDEMS
9/20/16, 1:58 AM
The dog part was a bit too much... but I'm glad I kept reading. Some issues on the narrative person (it jumps from 1 to 3 and viceversa) I would love to read more!
9/20/16, 1:51 AM
I think you got the names mixed up a bit here: Derek then signed a document, making Nick his power of attorney, in control of all Nick’s affairs and bank accounts. ... Nick walked towards a dresser in the bedroom and retrieved a leather collar. He snapped the collar about Nick’s neck and locked the collar in place." That aside, I love a good comeuppance story.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 1:38 AM
I have always enjoyed your stories. Thanks for sharing this latest one. I look forward to part 2.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 12:56 AM
Nice story, can't wait for a part 2. But I can't help but laugh at all these people that come to this site to read stories about men who forcefully take control, manipulate, and alter other men's very memories and personality. But the moment an animal gets hurt they start complaining and stop reading. Anyway keep up the good work.
Sep 19, 2016
cutlerfan
9/20/16, 12:14 AM
Your character tested his device by making someone kill their dog? Lost all interest in read more after that!
Anonymous
9/19/16, 11:12 PM
Why would Nick's father allow Derek the ability to take Nick?
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/19/16, 10:30 PM
please more of this
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/19/16, 10:29 PM
I hate you killed a dog but i loved the story keep it up
Sep 19, 2016
Ollie369
9/19/16, 8:50 PM
Thanks everyone for all the feedback. It's been ages since I last wrote anything and it's nice to know people still read some of my old stories. I've got some ideas for a second part to this story so hopefully I'll get round doing another one soon!
Sep 19, 2016
A CONCERNED READER
9/19/16, 8:35 PM
...HOW ABOUT GIVING US A 'BULLY' OR TWO, PERHAPS A 'GAY' HOMOPHOBIC GUY..YOUR OBVIOUSLY NOT AFRAID OF POLITICAL CORRECTNESS OR YOU WOULDN'T HAVEN'T STARTED THE STORY BY THROWING THE DOG UNDER THE CAR !!!..ALSO A 'TWISTED' COP OR TWO WOULD BE HOT...ALL MEN GOING COUNTER TO SOCIETY'S NORMS..HOW ABOUT IT ?????
UchihaDEMS
9/19/16, 7:58 PM
Espero con ansias la siguiente parte!