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10/30/16, 5:24 AM
The lovechild of Into the Woods and The Planet of Desire series by Tommyhawk (look for it on Nifty if you don't know it!) Brilliant idea!
Anonymous
10/30/16, 3:17 AM
I like the irony of the last bit of the story, where the Storyteller's like 'nah only world hoppers get turned into forest bimbos' when in actuality he could make literally anyone a forest slut with a story. I'd love to see a story that plays that up, where the recipient is completely naive of what's happening to him cause 'it could only ever happen to outsiders'
10/30/16, 1:36 AM
Oh and I think some of the strong criticism over the grammar is a bit much. I actually didn't notice that much, and I certainly wouldn't say any of it was "unintelligible". Pull more men from the real world into this realm please!
10/30/16, 1:33 AM
Wow. Very different and a great read. DEFINITELY not "children's lit" and thinking it is is quite ridiculous. I'd be very concerned if any child read this. Sure, it;s a tad out there, but there is definitely mind control in this from the substances he consumed in the forest lowering his inhibitions.
Anonymous
10/29/16, 11:11 PM
It would be awesome if this continued
Anonymous
10/29/16, 11:02 PM
PUT ME IN THE 'NOT IMPRESSED' GROUP, ALTHOUGH I'V ENJOYED PREVIOUS STORIES BY THIS AUTHOR, I FOUND THIS VERY 'UN-SEXY' & TOO 'FEY' FOR AN 'EROTIC' STORY........
Anonymous
10/29/16, 7:53 PM
Still waiting haha
Oct 25, 2016
Anonymous
10/29/16, 6:51 PM
definitely should write more leather stories
Oct 25, 2016
Firebird
10/29/16, 11:38 AM
Great Story btw: Angelo di Zolfofuoco, nice name for the devil, messenger of sulfur and fire/messenger of hell.
Spandexlad
10/29/16, 11:23 AM
I really enjoyed the story.
Tattcub
10/29/16, 10:42 AM
While I agree that really bad grammar and spelling can spoil a story, especially if in a book you have bought. We haven't bought anything here, just clicked a fave with our sweaty palms.I generally believe that most of these stories are meant to be read while scrolling down single handed (If you get my drift). I'm pretty sure that most of us appreciate the story, I certainly do and this author has been prolific over the years and knows what they're doing. Let's be honest here, most of us are here to blow our loads. So don't bother with the little stuff. Unless, of course you're bothered by your little stuff :-). Baralai thanks for your efforts.Always appreciated and really well written and imaginative.
Anonymous
10/29/16, 10:04 AM
Should really proofread a story before posting it. Half the sentences are unintelligible.
Anonymous
10/29/16, 5:43 AM
I volunteer for the next story! make me a dumb satyr himbo!
Anonymous
10/29/16, 5:37 AM
so hot want to see the next part!
Lipsk
10/29/16, 5:11 AM
loved it. so creative.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
10/29/16, 4:40 AM
Wow!! Damned hot! And to become a man's pet dog! Oh fuck!
Anonymous
10/29/16, 1:41 AM
WOW! This is equally funny, creative and hot! I agree with the man from the crowd, we want to hear more stories on this scenario! Since this is a fantasy world, you can add very whimsical features on the characters. I'd like a story with a cop turned into a muscled fairy boy, or a cowboy turned into a dumb unmanly knight-errant (riding a pink unicorn!).
Anonymous
10/29/16, 1:39 AM
I loved this story...it was very creative and if I may say so, edgy. A lot of people come to this site looking for revenge stories, or brutal sex, mind control slaves, etc. It's nice to read a happy, yet erotic story every once in a while.
LanceFan2001
10/28/16, 11:33 PM
I don't think "not into children's lit" and I read the same story. Balarai does it again with an awesome story! I prefer the house guest and the hotel series better but still a sexy fun read...
Anonymous
10/28/16, 11:18 PM
^ I agree, men being mind controlled into having sex with men is super out of place here.
Not into Children's lit....
10/28/16, 11:13 PM
Would make a good illustrated children's gay storybook or cartoon...However while I give the author credit for taking the time and effort to write it, I didn't find it the least bit 'sexy' or a 'turn-on' like most stories on this site & frankly felt it was totally OUT OF PLACE on Gay Spiral Mind Control...Sorry !!!
Anonymous
10/28/16, 6:52 PM
What a terrific story...great great job...thanks
Anonymous
10/28/16, 4:00 PM
This story was so imaginative and original. You may want to run a spell checker/grammar checker to give your document a go-through before you post. However ---- It goes without saying that this is the genesis of an entire series. Have fun drafting and editing the stories. You'll have fun.
Anonymous
10/28/16, 12:46 PM
Great als usual
Redbird
10/28/16, 11:13 AM
Wow. Very fun and imageitive . And no mention super sexy.
Anonymous
10/28/16, 10:06 AM
LOVED this ...
autoDream
10/27/16, 5:37 PM
Random Tist!! XD (thanks, haha) I'm just trying to finish up Chapter Two, which should explain how things work around there.
10/27/16, 5:06 PM
Welcome back, I have missed Jese ;)
Anonymous
10/27/16, 4:12 PM
I loved this story! It's just amazing! You should write many more chapters! I want to know how exactly the waiters are dressed, how custumers interact with the waiters, all. Also, would be great if you make a kind of universe where Ezra not only controls a restaurant, but an hotel too. A
Anonymous
10/27/16, 11:26 AM
So now that hynotism is over, we have to see him go to work! Who is the customer base? Are they hypnotized as well!