Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/18/17, 5:30 AM
Really wish the author would rediscover this and continue it!
Anonymous
4/18/17, 5:26 AM
I'm sooooo happy this continued please Write more :-)
Anonymous
4/18/17, 1:49 AM
Beautifully written--slow, sensual, intimate, and very detailed.
Anonymous
4/18/17, 1:25 AM
cant wait for the next part!
UchihaDEMS
4/17/17, 10:39 PM
A big top black guy dominated by a nerd one? Count me in! It always amaze me how little black males are the victims, thanks for this!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 9:56 PM
Sweet! Chapter 6 was perfect, very hot! But in my opinion, chapter 7 felt a little bit rush, everything happens very quickly, with few development, compared with the previous chapters. Anyway, it's very, very good. Would be good to know how the friends of the fancy metrosexual would react to see him turned into a rude, dirty man.
4/17/17, 8:41 PM
I still think that the sponsored story text could be better summarised. Something like: "Sponsored story teaser; a link is provided where you can purchase the full version." I'd also be supportive of locking each new sponsored story to the top of the first page, at least for a set period, like a week. I'm all for promoting the support of writing talent and I think this would be a great way to do it.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 8:39 PM
Wow that was awesome !! :-)
bucca
4/17/17, 7:33 PM
Very pleasant read, sucked me in! Almost faultless.
Paul
4/17/17, 6:58 PM
Affirmations are powerful your story is reinforcing
Anonymous
4/17/17, 6:00 PM
great job man, thank you
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:34 PM
There are so many levels to this story. I loved it!!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:33 PM
This posting should be highlighted as an example of how a first time writer takes the time to develop a story, work his craft, edit and create a final product. You should be very proud of your effort. How many first-timers do we read that should be embarassed? That is NOT the case with your story. You did very, very well.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:22 PM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:21 PM
That was hot!! Loved it.
Willie Cici
4/17/17, 4:20 PM
This posting is the EDITED VERSION with the ending based on the comments votes.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 1:46 PM
Please post part 2 quickly
Anonymous
4/17/17, 9:33 AM
Great first story
Anonymous
4/17/17, 6:13 AM
I loved this whole series and this was a good end to it. The only thing I wish had been different is that we'd have gotten to see Hero transformed before the Goddess's avatar took him. Into a dumb twinky himbo slut or something equally opposite of what he was. Thank you for writing such great stories, Baralai!
Apr 16, 2017
Nick Bottom
4/17/17, 6:02 AM
You can't just stop here, dude. Lol.
Apr 16, 2017
Anonymous
4/17/17, 5:39 AM
Hot. Can't wait for more.
lloyd311@aol.com
4/17/17, 3:16 AM
Glad you enjoyed the story! And yeah, I get that criticism. I'm sorry if you find the cold open "annoying." It wasn't intended to be. That scene was written out of sequence, a long time ago, and I cannot recall exactly what I was thinking at the time. But I always liked that it gave a hint of what the story was going to be about. What Tommy's angst was like. And that it gave some "hotness" before all the necessary set-up that followed. Several of the people I showed the story to before posting it made the same comment, but I still think it works. We'll see. Anyhow, many, many thanks... LLOYD
Anonymous
4/17/17, 2:51 AM
I really have to say I absolutely loved your story! I' ve been reading these kinds of stories for years (hypnosis, body swap, muscle growth etc) and it' s the first time I just HAD to make a comment! That's how much I liked it! You see it's the first time I found a gay-to-straight hypnosis/transformation story after searching through the web for years! And though I am a gay man and I guite enjoy the straight-to-gay stories, I 've read so many that they became guite boring after a while. But a gay-to-straight one that was also beautifully writen like this? Simply amazing. I do hope you continue writing, since you seem to have abandoned this. Is there any other site that you have posted the whole story or others like that? And does anybody know where can I find more gay-to-straight stories? Most of the rest in this site seem to be simply straight-to-gay that the writter erroneously tagged as gay-to-straight.
Willie Cici
4/17/17, 2:46 AM
I repaired the links. They should be working.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 1:02 AM
I just bought it and am loving it. The knife just keeps getting twisted into Tommy more and more and it's so hot. I love how Tommy starts off so high and mighty, and how quickly he falls. Plus, the sex is hot. My only gripe is that it starts off with a flash forward. It's like watching your favorite TV show, which starts half way through the episode for a few minutes, and then says "48 hours before" or something. So annoying! Minor complaint though. It's deliciously hot.
Anonymous
4/16/17, 11:48 PM
Damn--this is really hot. I can't wait for more. Maybe have Ben eventually switch over from using his feet for conditioning to outright hypnosis? Whatever direction you choose to go, this is great.
Apr 16, 2017
LeadPb
4/16/17, 7:28 PM
Good to see you back, was beginning to get sad that you stopped writing.
Anonymous
4/16/17, 7:06 PM
Never did get to see a part 2,huh?
Apr 16, 2017
Anonymous
4/16/17, 5:07 PM
Cool story :-) hope it continues and awesome to hear there might be more of the lusta academy as well as I loved the first three chapters :-)
4/16/17, 1:27 PM
I've come back to read this story. This time around, I noticed in particular Mike's internal storm of trying to justify his actions. It's a special author who can capture the turmoil that a guy goes through when realizing he's gay. Wonderful job.