Recent Comments

Jun 18, 2017
Anonymous
6/19/17, 4:40 PM
Seems like a missed opportunity that the actual dad didn't become the Daddy
LongtimeFan
6/19/17, 1:57 PM
Interesting story! Love the idea. Also, Quick question: did you take the names from the real Khnumhotep and Niankhkhnum, the "first recorded gay couple in history?" What a cool detail!
Drepanididae
6/19/17, 9:53 AM
And thank you for your comment, high praise from a great writer. I loved your X-Change and 6 Pack Series. There are a ton of different plots one could explore I either of them.
Jun 18, 2017
Anonymous
6/19/17, 7:47 AM
“Boy, you can’t give me something that already belongs to me!” Love that line.
frstone
6/19/17, 5:49 AM
i love it! please continue making stpries like this!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/19/17, 4:31 AM
Still hoping for more. :-)
Anonymous
6/19/17, 1:51 AM
so hot ! been a fan since No Homo. you are a genius ! tickles my prostate reading every word! from beginning to the end
Daddy controller
6/19/17, 1:49 AM
please make this a series ! Maybe write about how the other guys were mindfucked and get in the neighborhood. I really like the way you write your mind control stories. It's so hot how these straight men are so clueless about the gay acts they're doing. They are so humiliating but they think it's true and right. A++++++++
6/19/17, 12:43 AM
Very nicely done, and hot! I'm flattered you decided to explore my universe. I particularly liked the bit about recording the voice and changing it. (Fun coincidence: the model you link as "Walter's dream body" is one of the bodies I use in the new photocomic I'm working on for DeviantArt.)
6/19/17, 12:13 AM
Nice progression, really hot stuff. Looking forward to more from you!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 11:03 PM
Point well taken
Anonymous
6/18/17, 10:36 PM
Can't wait the sequel!!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 9:01 PM
Excellent---loved the slow descent into submission
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:50 PM
Nice concept---innocent surfing captures the unwary.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:42 PM
This is the making of a series. Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:38 PM
Great concept---but a little more seduction/induction helps build the anticipation of the payoff
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:10 PM
Short but a good job. I thought you jumped in a little fast. I would have liked hearing to seduction leading up to the start of the story a little.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/18/17, 6:58 PM
This is the attitude a male should have around all men.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 6:35 PM
Excellent series. Each section so damn sexy. Love the club scene and the "not in control" aspect. Continuing this would be great. If I could interject, perhaps a superhero in similar situation. Thanks for the series. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 3:43 PM
Too short:( Your stories are always great, though
Anonymous
6/18/17, 3:01 PM
Why the 'rider' at the end? Unnecessary like the ones who apologise right at the start! There was no straight sex in the story As to the story it was ok. Nice premise - bit like the stepford wives - and reasonable execution.
Meatbox
6/18/17, 1:38 PM
Will upload an edited version soon to get rid of the puntuation and grammar issues.
B
6/18/17, 12:07 PM
Very very hot ! You're easily one of my favorite authors ! Love the very quick mindfuck of these men. Please do more !!!!!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 11:41 AM
Very hot, thank you
Anonymous
6/18/17, 9:22 AM
It's a good story. I think it could have been expanded, but it is good as it is. One question: what do you mean when you say straight porn? Because if this is straight, I want to see you you think gay porn is like :P
6/18/17, 9:05 AM
Loved it
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:17 AM
I used to lick ants off of trees
Anonymous
6/18/17, 5:13 AM
The lack of punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure made this unreadable for me
Anonymous
6/18/17, 4:57 AM
I'm really enjoying this series. Very different from your other stuff. I like it.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 2:17 AM
Thanks for writing. I would love to read more.